rate_review Reviews

different. the idea of Miki being so immersed in his music that he didn;t notice Touga molesting him struck me as original, although afterwards i thought to myself - why didn't someone think of this before? i was happy that he snapped out of it, as i was thinking that to be oblivious to someone having sex with you was a little far fetched. but Miki snapped out of his imersion in time to be an active participant. that was good.

At first Touga seemed to be the one with more experience, as is expected of his seme like attitude and presence. he is the intiator in this afterall. but then when Miki becomes aware we get the impression that Miki is not really being taken advantage of, welcomes the attentions and possibly has done this before. he seems to turn the control around by telling Touga when it is ok to proceed, that he enjoyed it and to ask him next time - consenting, even intiating a next time. it was unexpected and took me two reads to understand. but once i saw the inkling that this could be a pairing with Miki topping from the bottom i liked the idea.

i would have liked to see more detailed sex, more drawn out sex - it was too short!! lol. but aptly so i suppose since Touga admitted it was his first time and the loss of control (coming too quickly) helps to turn the table of dominant over to Miki.

i'm glad to see this pairing. i'm surprised there isn't more of it. thank you for the story.

Mmmm that was so hot. Miki and touga rock

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Normally, I\'m more of a Touga+Saionji fan, but this was nice; Touga wasn\'t a jerk towards Miki at the end. This was nice and pleasent to read.