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for The Time For Change Is Now

by Reika

person d-chan
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I gtarttarted reading this wonderful story with your latest posting of it. I don\'t know where my mind was before now that I didn\'t see it before now. But I will make up for that now by sending you this review of the story, in it\'s entirety, so far.

This is the best FAKE fanfiction I have read, to date. I love the level of angst in it. You temper it with almost-sap. There\'s no true sappiness in it but there\'s something. I can\'t think of a word for it so almost-sap is it. Your characters are well thought out and thoroughly well-rounded. Thank you. Those qualities are such a rarity in fanfiction anymore and it\'s a true pleasure to find someone who takes the time to make the charas \'real\'.

The pairings thing? Well, I of course, root for the DeeXRyo pairing but after reading your story...I can go for the DeeXJJ pairing too. In fact, based on thents nts of this story, it might make more sense to have it end in a DXJJ pairing. Or not.

Since it\'s truly up to you how it all comes out, (you and your muse) I\'ll just sit here patiently and wait.

Thanks for sharing your vision of the FAKE universe with us all.
person Sorcha
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was the chapter that finally it, it, made me cry. I\'m mostly glad that I hadn\'t found this story until now...even if it did mean I stayed up two hourser ter than I should have because I just couldn\'t stop reading knowing that there was more. My favorite thing about this work is that it\'s just so real. Every word, every action, each line of dialog is rapped up in such plausability that any preconcieved notions I had about the characters were not even a factor. Each person has their own motovations/past/desires/beliefs that fuel their world view. Although I may not AGREE with all the characterizations, they are completely internally consistent and it\'s irrelevant to how much I love this story. I also particularly love the you you mix some philosophy into the story, not just about religion but some literature and soul-searching questions as well. As far as I\'m concerned this story has everything. I\'ve read the A/N and have a hard time believing people were unhappy with this. ::shrugs:: Perhaps they\'re only reading it superficially and upset when their own prejudices toward pairings and characterizations are not reflected? Consider me a new-found fan. I\'m going to look up your other works ::looks at clock:: um, but not until tomorrow, I can\'t afford to get addicted to another long story right now. Thank you from a greatful reader, and I\'m eagerly awaiting the conclusion.
person Nanaka
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeee!! Love it, Love it, Love it! can\'t wait to read the end!
person Nanaka
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE! I love it, can\'t wait till the next chapter!^_^
person Nanaka
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it Love it! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter! Please get it up soon! ^_^
person Nanaka
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Keep goin. Update soon. yadda yadda yadda. I hate having to review. ^_^
person Nanaka
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! GREAT! KEEP GOING! MORE! ^_^
person Nanaka
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Please write more. ^_^

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