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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definetely has potential... the only real critisism I have is it\'s too short with not enough detail... other then that, good work and keep going... =^-^=
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To tell the truth the story is just too boring. All it is is scenes from the series that have been written up. And it\'s not like you\'ve done much to it at all like describing what they\'re doing, it\'s just cutting and pasting script. It. sucks.
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohh that was so cute adorble
could you make more but then with sora hehehehe cause he is my favorite chara
i love yaoi
could you make more but then with sora hehehehe cause he is my favorite chara
i love yaoi
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
realy is a shame such a good start
cant someelse finshied it?
#cries*
cant someelse finshied it?
#cries*
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this fic so far. I've never seen the show, so I can't comment about OOCness or whatever, but so far I like it. :) I hope you continue it soon.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gin: Wow, Sam seems just as annoying as Zap.
Zap: Hey! *is bodily thrown out of the den by White Wolf and Daimond*
Gin: Thank you. As I was about to say, we like your fic, and we hope you get that other one done soon so you can get this one done.
Daimond: As we like to say around here -
All: Happy writings!
Jin: And why do you have this rated NC17?
White Wolf: Probably for future chapters. But could you tell us?
White Wolf: Please? Again -
All: Happy writings!
Zap: Hey! *is bodily thrown out of the den by White Wolf and Daimond*
Gin: Thank you. As I was about to say, we like your fic, and we hope you get that other one done soon so you can get this one done.
Daimond: As we like to say around here -
All: Happy writings!
Jin: And why do you have this rated NC17?
White Wolf: Probably for future chapters. But could you tell us?
White Wolf: Please? Again -
All: Happy writings!
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice one! you do know that there are Japanese Manga as them as and couple, and yes Tuskasa is and girl in all of them. new couple nice.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice se use update
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i dont wanna sound like sex craved little weirdo but you really should put some yaoi in ::nods::
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So that took you days to write huh...so did Chapter 4 have a point? At least you nowll Tll Tsukasa rightow tow that finals are over with, you were going to post more or less everyday right. Any other people believe this, I\'ll laugh. Finals have been over for a week and she has posted all of 1 new chapter. Wow. Wahoo. Yipee. And you don\'t write very much...Ante up b**** its Christmas. Have you even plotted the next chapter? Who lives in a pineapple under the sea, SamUrai KicksAss! Absorbent and yellow, and porous is he... okay that was bad. Now that your mental cheerleader i sma smack and is passed out on the living room couch, keep writing Minion!!!