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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nummy! It was an interesting read! Thanks for sharing with us ^.^
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa! totally awsome!!!!!!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending. very nice.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww - °fluff° *happy kitten rolling on floor
Thank you for writing this story.
It was a joy to read and a good change from all the
angst and violence and hardcore stuff that flows around.
Everybody needs some fluff in his or her life - at least from time to time
Hey, even Ran figured that out!
It\'s so good that they want the same in the end. Loved the part when Ran
tried to sneak out and Yohji pulled him back, thus without even knowing it
saving the day and their future love life.
May they live happily ever after before Schwaomesomes in the mix...
wait - that would be the angsty, violent, hardcore part...oh well, maybe later
Can I talk you into writing a sequel??
happy here
ryushin
Thank you for writing this story.
It was a joy to read and a good change from all the
angst and violence and hardcore stuff that flows around.
Everybody needs some fluff in his or her life - at least from time to time
Hey, even Ran figured that out!
It\'s so good that they want the same in the end. Loved the part when Ran
tried to sneak out and Yohji pulled him back, thus without even knowing it
saving the day and their future love life.
May they live happily ever after before Schwaomesomes in the mix...
wait - that would be the angsty, violent, hardcore part...oh well, maybe later
Can I talk you into writing a sequel??
happy here
ryushin
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, may the sap continue!!
You wouldn\'t kill a somewhat middleaged yaoi-reader
by making Ran go ballistic in the morning and pretend it never happened.
You wouldn\'t, would you?!...would you??
Still like your fic very much, esp. because we get the inside of both participants
Still read you
ryushin
You wouldn\'t kill a somewhat middleaged yaoi-reader
by making Ran go ballistic in the morning and pretend it never happened.
You wouldn\'t, would you?!...would you??
Still like your fic very much, esp. because we get the inside of both participants
Still read you
ryushin
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so THIS is how PWP\'s are supposed to be written... *takes notes*
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! That was amazing! So Hot! Cant\'t wait for the next chap...Thanks. ^_^
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*feels tortured
How could you stop THERE!!!
You are a devil! *tsehehe
Still working great - keep writing.
Looked for a flaw, couldn\'t find it.
Don\'t torture them (..and us poor readers too long) will ya!
Later
ryushin
How could you stop THERE!!!
You are a devil! *tsehehe
Still working great - keep writing.
Looked for a flaw, couldn\'t find it.
Don\'t torture them (..and us poor readers too long) will ya!
Later
ryushin
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hwaaa!!!!!!!! kage-chan is a meanie... continue hayaku!! onegai!!
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I haven\'t known about this site too long....but so far, this is the first fic I\'ve read here that I felt was good enough to review. It\'s well written and spends a satisfying amount of time digging into the characters heads instead of going straight to the smut. Really nice. I look forward to the other chapters ^__^