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for The Dream

by acmelger

schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was hot. ^_^ Understatement, a bit. Heh, it\'s very refreshing to see an Omi who likes it a little rough, you can get tired of him being an angel all the time. Good stuff.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was so cute!!!!!!!! i luved it!
person ~cry~
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
veryveryveryveryvery nice!!!! Aya and Omi are just great together!! Thanks for a great read!
person iJ3i
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so HOT! I can\'t get over how hot that was. ::thinks about it for a little longer, then concludes that yes, it was very HOT:: Hmm... Now the number of Aya/Omi fans can be upped to three! It was sexy, which is good, and had it\'s kawaii moments, which is even better, so all in all, this story rocks! Okay...I\'ll calm down now. G\'night!

J3
person Santurion
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ONaugNaughty Omi! Yet so sweet, as always!
person Yoru
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot, and dare I say HOT!

I really do adore this pairing, and I also like SchuldigxAya, but then again, I think I like Aya with just about any of them.

Anyway, I like that you have Aya sleeping naked. *drools uncontrollably at mental images* You definitely kept them in character, and Aya\'s line \"They weren\'t you\" just melted my heart. So perfect. I absolutely look forward to reading more of your stuff.
person kingdom
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaawww the ending sons like the angsty part 2 wher Aya spills hes whole felings and stuff to Omi, not that tis a BAD thing ^_-
person emma
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"They weren\'t you.\"

Dies!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one word : KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
i loved it, its so sweet, romantic, fluffy, fluffy little bunnys with big cute eyes just begging for a home....wait.. what was i saying..oh right.. story.. review... hehe, it was really good, i love omixaya pairings, please write more soon ^_^

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