rate_review Reviews

*flails and dies* That waas ...impossible. X3 Thats the greatest smut fic I\'ve ever read. *worships you* it is concievable that I might need a change of panties after reading that. I don\'t think I could leave a comment that could say how great that fic was. <3 <3 <3

This is a fantastic story. The writing itself is excellent, both characters are thoroughly in-character, which is always refreshing, and...well, sensuous couldn\'t begin to describe this story. ^_~

However, there\'s one thing that detracts from the experience, and that\'s the number of distracting and annoying typos throughout the story (particularly in the second chapter). As an example, this line, towards the end of the story:

\"He sed ted the slender body beneath him, clutching the boy’s hips tide ide deeper inside him\"

That\'s totally unintelligible. ^^; And like I said, it\'s really distracting, and keeps the reader from being able to sink into the narrative. The story could use a revision to clear out these simple mistakes, and then it would be utterly perfect.

Thanks for a very pleasant read! ^_^

Oh my!!! This is hot! I\'ve read it so many times, and i never get bored.

Gods, that was hot. Well done.

Okay, so I\'m falling madly in love with you. So what? Just leave me alone!

*Runs off to build a shrine in your honor under my bathroom sink.

Your newest stalker~
Lexi

i\'ve never reviewed a adult fanfiction before... u know embarasment.... but that was so fucking hot!!! the description!!!! u are a god send!!! write more and i will read

Damn that was an incrdeible story!!!!! O.O This is the best DD fic I\'ve ever read, possibly the best fic preiod. The wording, detail, storyline, and smut, all the absolute best!!!! Loads of cookies for you! ^__^ I\'m gonna read it again!

... First of all, I don\'t believe I\'m exaggerating in the LEAST when I say this to you: This has to be the best fanfic I\'ve EVER read. This is my favorite work of fanfiction writing ever, barr-none. I cannot completely describe how COMPLETELY I enjoyed reading this. So in-character but for the places where they were DESIGNED to snap, so sexy and very well-written, thought out masterfully and written with just the right amount of skill and time spent building up to it... TRULY a magnificent work of writing, if I do say so myself! The summaries and description were nothing short of purely witty and utterly amusing and I cannot adequately praise you ENOUGH-! Thank you personally for writing this lovely fanfic!

*passes out*

dear god, that may be the hottest thing i\'ve read EVER. i was about to hyperventilate too, on more than one occasion. you know what\'s weird, tonight i went to see \"alexander\" (fuck the reviews, colin farrell is my fav. actor!) and somehow this story made me think of that movie in a weird sort of way that i can\'t explain. anyway, i am thoroughly impressed!

*wonders how i\'m going to get to sleep now...*

Wow. That was awsome. Really well written, and increadibly sexy. You r I h I hope to read more of your work, but now I have to go wipe the drool from my chin.