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By all that is holy and unholy WOW!

That is without the doubt the best freaking fanfic I have read since I came to this site, I look forward to furture fanfics.

And as for this being your first yaoi fanfics, I wouldn't have know if you hadn't said so, you must have a natural talent for writing.

Keep up your work, it is excellent!

ah, wow! What a ride! exquisite!

Dang..you da mastah..Dear Lord that ending was hot...why'd you omit some stuff? it's beautiful, I'd die to see more..the you you described it...~wills heart to stop fluttering~..I'm all flustered now..look what you've done..You've gone and upped my libido about 6000 notches..You're GOD

I remember reading the first chapter and nealry dying, but reading the rest...oh!! *shudder*shuddder*orgasm*shudder*twitch* Yeah..that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good I think I died. I was lookin' for a good yaoi fix...but man o man....you make everything so REAL! I felt like Rae watching Eclipse in the tub and...other naughty thingheh heh heh. Man, I want a Raenef to play with..especailly were I a man! WOW!! I drooled, I cried, I twitched, I yearned and now I gove Kudos to you! Most excellent job!! Yes....My mind is currently in a state much like pudding...and my body glowing goo...Ah.

I'm sorry, I forgot to mention: YOU ARE GOD! Not just any God though, oh no, my friend, you are THE God. I mean, who else can make two demons fooking each other senseless so fuzzy and sexay? Like Eclipse in a bunny suit? And who else can successfully write an orgasmatastic story like this? GOD CAN! And therefore, you are God, Oh-Holy-One! Now pardon me while I go vent my newly acquired frustrations on my boyfriend...

This would be the first Demon Diary fic I've read that's any good. Fabulous hook up, with excellent Eclipse characterization. You rock. I give you permission to write more, in any fandom. You get the Clef approved stamp.

^_^ Go you.

Good fucking lord! I wanted to review to all the chapters, but i couldnt stop reading it!! You are amazing! The story! It made my heart race, made me cry, laugh, and wish desperately that I could have love like that! You are my goddess, and my inspiration. Your stories and your very being is my muse! Never stop, your work is fantastic! I want to read it over and over again! I cant possibly express everything I am feeling right now! My heart feels like it about to explode! ((Though, my being empathetic to such terrible degrees that any properly described emotion, even on the computer, with reflect itself in me doesnt help a bit)) Your characters were so very alive, so full and rounded, not flat like most might be. You put their forms in my mind as though I was standing there, or I was reading one of the books. Their pictures, you described with such accuracy, and true to the kanga- which I only found a few weeks before reading this. The scents you describe...I can almost smell them, the tastes are tastable! I could cry from how terribly good it all is! I know it sound almost horribly wrong, but still, its all just so fantastic, I want to read all of your work. *Bows softly* I thank you and praise you for writing such amazing work. Dont stop here...broaden your horizons and let your writing guide you to wherever it may. Please, I ask you again. Never ever stop writing. I want to see your work published and on bestsellest fst for the rest of my life....even if it is gay erotica...who cares >> *hugs and kisses* I shower you with my blessings! May you be magically inclined for your eternal life!

Kit Irving, fellow fanfic writer

Oh...My....GOD!!!! THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!! All of the chapters, were, to say the least, THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST!!!!!! YOU RULE THE SCHOOL OF LEMON WRITING!!!! Your stories were not just hard core sex, they had a plot line, too! And a great plot line at that! This was ghte best story I have ever read and the last chapter was AMAZING!!!! CHAPTER FOUR WAS THE ABSOLUTE BEST LEMON IN EXISTENCE!!!!!!! You have to be dubbed the Queen of Yaoi and Ultimate Ruler of Demon Diary fictions!!!! YOU RULE!!!! YOU DESERVE BOTH OF THOSE TITLES!!!!! If I were good enough in paint, I would make you those awards....hell, I will try to anyway, you deserve it! You are the most amazing author, this is a story I can read a million times over and NEVER GET TIRED OF!!! It will be like I am reading it the first time every time I read it! THIS IS THE BEST!!!!! You rock!!! You should be very, very proud of yourself for putting out such a great fiction, who cares if it took so long to put out the chapters! It was definatley worth the wait! You should be so proud of yourself, really! You have gotten yourself a new fan, I will be looking forward to more of your stories! You are absolutely AMAZING!!!!!! Please, definatley keep writing! If all fan fiction writers wrote like you, well, we would have lots of great...no, great is an understatement.....ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS, STUPENDOUS, FANTASTIC AUTHORS OUT THERE!!!! Lets see...what is a word that can mean all of that....? Absofabendoustic? Fantendousabsolous? I don\'t know if there is a word for it, but if there was, it should be Vampy_Chan. In the future of Yaoi fanfictions, and all fan fictions for that matter, that should be a term. \"Wow, that story was so Vampy_Chan!\" \"Look at this writer, they are so Vampy_Chan!\" See, it shall all pulgethgether.... YOU ARE GREAT AND ANYONE OUT THERE WHO WANTS TO READ A \"Vampy_Chan\" Fiction, (meaning the new word, not the author,houghough I mean that too...^_^;;;;) THEY SHOULD DEFINATLEY LOOK INTO THIS FICTION!!!! ITS THE BEST!!!!!

OMFG That was the best fic ever. No I mean, that was the best fiction I have ever read of anything anywhereohmygodIbowdownanshipshipyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*pant pant*

OMG

That was amazing. How you managed to get THAT hot and THAT heavy And STILL remain in character...it\'s a gift, A gitf you must use only for good!

And i was so scared you were never going to finish this.

*weeps*

Oh, I am so happy....so happppppy!!!!!!!

i forgive you for making us wait so long now ^_^