rate_review Reviews

A gripping tale. I liked your characterizations of Youji and Aya. In an impossibly surreal, death-oriented 'life', Youji chooses life by choosing Aya, and Aya chooses life by choosing Youji. 'Get together' stories about this couple seldom have the meat to them that this one does, and I felt good about the ending, (and good about life and myself), but you have a seed for continuing the story if you choose. Maybe a story about these two living a 'normal' life in Seattle would be boring to some, but I would welcome it as a breath of fresh air. I like your writing style and gravity of purpose, but most of all I like and respect your insight into the 'anima' of this couple. Thanks for sharing your vision with me.

wow. just wow.

Oh no! I was getting all into it and then you leave me at this horrible cliffhangery cliffhanger.
so mean. T_T I\'ve read a few of your story snippits here and there (do you ever finish them????) but this so far is one of your better ones I think. Not that the others are bad or anything but this really caught me up. More!

This is good. I\'m a huge fan of the Weiss boys (just want to hug & squeeze them cause they are so cute/sexy). This fanfic has a bit of a twist to it by adding \"Daniel\", very interesting. You\'ve caught my attention. You keep writing and I\'ll keep reading. PLEASE post the next chapter soon. ^ _ ^

okay. now... continue! now! ..nnnow! now? .... CONTINUE ARGH
seriously, your writing is amazing! I\'m keeping diligent watch for more

Oh, I like this. Yohji\'s personality is so interesting. The brutal honesty mixed with a sarcastic caustic edge aimed completely at himself. I also like the analogy that you used. Very nice stuff. Can\'t wait for more.