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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah I loved "Portrait Without Sin"!!! In my opinion it's one of the best FAKE fics I've ever read in my life XD ANYWAYS! Lovely beginning of this fic, can't wait to see what happens next *love*
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, he better not die. I mean... this is a good start. It certainly suck syou right into the story, BUT HE BETTER NOT DIE! Ummm, yeah. If he dies, the kittens get it and all that... yep. Don\'t let him die. Pwease?
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another great story from a fabulous author. I love your style of writing. You captured the emotions of the characters very well, especially all of Dee\'s grief and despair of losing Ryo. I hope you continue this very emotionally moving story. Keep up the awesome writing! I am looking forward to reading more. :)
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-wide eyed-
Well after POS you have another fan but GEEZE! -wails-
POOR DEE...No..POOR BIKKY!
I mean really you're leaving Dee and Bikky together O.o' they willl kill each other by sundown ><
Ahh well, I'll be drooling over this first chapter anyway -hunkers down and proceeds in bawling and droolin-
Well after POS you have another fan but GEEZE! -wails-
POOR DEE...No..POOR BIKKY!
I mean really you're leaving Dee and Bikky together O.o' they willl kill each other by sundown ><
Ahh well, I'll be drooling over this first chapter anyway -hunkers down and proceeds in bawling and droolin-
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh
my
god.
You did NOT just do that. You couldn't REALLY have.... Aw, shit, I think I'm crying. Hm. Tears. Yep.
my
god.
You did NOT just do that. You couldn't REALLY have.... Aw, shit, I think I'm crying. Hm. Tears. Yep.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!! *hugs you* I LOOOOOOOVE that story!!! I mean....I like.......cried...and stuff......OH GOD!!!! *sob* And the tilte was perfect, the writing was soooo personal! I can't grab that kind of angle for the life of me *bows to you* I am not worthy, but your story was so FRIGGIN' AWESOME!!!! *gasp* but that was only part one........MUST READ PART TWO...........*kisses your feet* Pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, and more pweaseness, update soon!!!
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. This is just... This is really intense! Normally I avoid deathfics like the plague, but I enjoyed Portrait Without Sin so much I thought I\'d look into this one too. I\'m on the edge of tears even after that first chapter, but I have a feeling I\'ll keep reading it to the end. You\'re a wonderful writer, Ryoan, one of my favorites. *hugs!*
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, poor Ryo, looks around for more of the fic... ahhhhhh, no more posted yet ..... please add more soon ;-)
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my gosh! I don\'t know if I should continue reading. I don\'t think my poor heart can take it. If this first chapter is any indication, the story is going to be more of an emotional roller coaster than \"Portrait.\" Oh, I am going to be so heart-broken if anything really happened to Ryo. And poor Dee. How is he ever going to cope? Hell, how AM I ever going to cope?
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.........*sniffles*......okai well...WHAT TO SAY TO THAT...well it was definatley believable just look at how many ppl u got buying some tissues and its only the first ch!!! you did say there was some kind of twist to this...jus dont let dee die too!!! pwees!!! ill definatly read this story to the end (with some difficulty of course) so update asap
~Aka
~Aka