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Oh God! You have me crying harder then I have ever cried for any story! Holy shit! The emotions in this were just so damn real that I almost wanted to scream at Ryo like Dee was! If I could write half as well as this, I\'d be happy! Please continue this... Even though it\'s going to break my heart to read it... I will. Now I need to go get a new box of tissues and take my contacts out... Oh God! *Sobs harder* Awesome work!!

All I can say is \"this is going to be a awesome story!\" Your story kept me interested throughout it and details were just enough to tell that you can tell what is going on in this story.Now you just have to update so I will become happy. Cant wait!

You truly have an art to knock people off their feet right from the beginning. And to be making poor Dee suffer again...! *Buckets of tears falling* I definitely don\'t have a clue where you are heading with this st.. I.. I mean, I\'m sure that it\'s going to be filled with heartbreaking moments, but how this is going to all come out is the real question. Unless you really do leave us sobbing all the way through! God, I don\'t know if I can buy that many kleenxes.

I think you did an excellent job with what you\'ve written so far. Lots of intense emotions and action going on. Really loved the weight of meaning with the slence and slowness of everything. That split second of their hands nearly touching. The seriousness of Dee trying to take care of Ryo. His reaction of hearing the single tone of the monitor... It was all great! I do seriously grieve that you killed one of them, but I\'m going to be sticking with the story anyway. You\'re fascinating with your ideas!

Nice start. Very well-written.

I just couldn\'t stop crying. Out of all the death fics I read... this one was the most believeable. It really made you think that Ryo is dead. NO! HE CAN\'T BE! *prays for a miracle*

And as always you got the characters right on the money.

Arggggg. I just can\'t get over the fact that you killed him! AHH! Poor Dee! i just want to hug him. :-(

*sniffs back tears* If I did love you so much, I would kill you for having Ryo die! But I could see Dee reacting that way to Ryo getting shot. Yeah, you are right on the money. I can\'t wait for you to update again. You are the best fanfiction writer I have come across in a long, long time. I\'m not trying to flatter you either. You seriously are the BEST. Please updaoon,oon, now, lest I go insane from waiting.

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Analia

Well you definately have my attention. I\'m eagerly awaiting the next part. =D

Oh no!!! Ryo is dead?! What will Dee do now?! Awaiting the next chapter!!!

OH GOD! YOU\"RE GONNA KILL ME AGAIN!! Portrait wasn\'t enough anguish? Poor Dee, suffering again! You are just too cruel... but I love you for it. After reading your other story, I don\'t think I will be disappointed in you ideas with this one, which you already warned was going to be much darker. I have my tissues ready!! Please continue with it...

Man, you rock with your angst! This is really great, very emotionally moving. The scene of Dee trying to help Ryo, was terrific. I could see him doing that very thing. I hope to see more of this story up soon. Yes, I\'m into gut wrenching pain.... *sniffing back the tears already*