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for Midnight Snack

by Iapetus

schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was great.
The ending was so funny. That would be embarassing.
person Del0
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Your portrayal of the relationship between Sanzo and Goku, limited though it was because of the PWP, caught my attention immediately. I like the way you described their relationship through dialogue and narration. The detail of Goku remembering their agreement was lovely and my favorite part. Very enjoyable, thank you for sharing.
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*purrs at Becky and her yummy lemon*

=^^=
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!! I like how you made Goku the agressive one. ^^ BWAHAHAHAHA SANZO! GET A TASTE OF YOUR OWN MEDICINE!!
person Hakuryuu
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

XD Gotta love it. You kept them in character very well, and Gojyo\'s comment about the \"sausage\" was absolutely to die for :) Keep it up... I\'d love to see more from you! (*especially* a 8/5 ::wink wink::) Again, nice job!
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. We\'ll see if this comment actually posts. *Grr...*

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You did a fantastic job, and I am looking forward to more of your Saiyuki smut. The characterizations were right on, and the descriptions were super hot. I also love Gojyo\'s little appearance. <3<3<3 Great one-shot!


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