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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Duuuuuude! Ramp up the smut, eh? And I thought my Faye/Jet was porn! If you revise it, make them fight first, and let her actually kick his ass! You can go so many places with this...
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i really liked that shit it was hot. you should consider continuing cuz i was like daaaamn.
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....that's all I can say. ^______^
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, omg, this is SOOOOOOOOOOO fucking GOOD! ^_^ I loved the whole concept since it's completely new and original, and DAMN, I felt as if I was watching a porno vid! Very descriptive and hot! You should keep writing more, and SOON!
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even though that was EXTREMELY smutty, it was actually very well-written, so I really liked it. ^_^ That, and I've always wondered what a Spike/Electra fic would be like, and now I know! Very, VERY good!!! EVERYBODY READ & REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a story that gets right to the point. Whooosh, Electra, going for it. Spike's always been kinda hot for her anyhow. Great PWP.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I ALWAYS love your fics, and hell yeah, Electra's one hot ass babe! XD It was short, sweet, and to the point. MAMA A HO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lmfao
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::swallows heavily:: Wooow, I am trying SO hard not to jack-off right now! Son of a freaking BITCH, that was hot! Just picturing Electra all neked....::drools::
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oops! I meant she said "i love a man that can fuck my ass", but whatever...lol, I'm pretty sure that you know your own story, eheh. -_-' It's really hot, though...you've got a gift. Keep it up. ^________^
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Um... That was pretty hot. I think you need to add a bunch more chapter of cencorless fucking! Because that shit knocked my socks off and my shorts and so on...