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for To Get To You

by ldkelly

person Mr. Pants
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a GGGGREAT! fic! It had sweetness and specialness and it was beautiful! (tear ;_;) I love it. The only thing I would change is the fact that the lemon was such a quickie. I really didn\'t know where the lemon begun much less where the lemon ended. u_u *sigh* I was a little disapointed, but I\'ll live! A_A Well, write more please!
person Hatchan
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good job. Nice WxM story just full of sweetness and love. You\'ve done a good job, though you really didn\'t need to repeat the conversation they had in ep. 23. We know about the sandwiches, you could\'ve started there ^_~ But very good job, still.
person vegetas angel
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that wasa wonderful songfnd ind it tided in where he dose get killed. that was wonderful.

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