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Me like Zhaha And Crrot Together very much continue

I simply adore your work. Your plots are beautifully constructed and well thought out. The dialog is vivid and explanatory without being boring and overly complicated. Sure, you\'ve probably heard this praise before, yet I just felt the need to state it. I do hope to read some of your work in the near future.

Oh, as for your site, the stories refuse to show up (I planted a light complaint about this a month past) still. Oh well, ^^; I just would love to read Millie/Carrot or Zaha/Carrot a bit more than I do...

I can only hope that I can become as well as a writer as you are. Uke Carrot fans enjoy your writing, keep at it! >D

-Shinya (penname)

Awww man! It ended just as it started to get good! Man, this is so strange, a yaoi fanfic with character that has a plot??? And a GOOD plot??? LOL You accomplished the impossible. Heh, and I\'m glad you didn\'t make Carrot stop liking women. I can accept that he\'s such a horndog that he could swing both ways. Oh, and I agree about there being more to him than meets the eye. Heck, he seemed to be a pretty nice/smart kid so his hormones must just override his brain a lot. But he does have a brain.

Here\'s hoping that you finish this... err... what was the update date on this? *feels fear*

0.0 please tell me you\'re going to update. i don\'t think i could handle it if you don\'t. *gets down on knees* please update!!! i love this story so much! its just so great. you are one damn good author, i wish i could write half as good as you. i\'ll be sitting right here waiting for the next chapter. don\'t make me wait to long, i don\'t think i have enough twinkies...T.T

ohhh, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!

Now you must write more! Update! Update!