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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to say there were some tense mistakes that interrupted the flow of your story. Like when you would say is instead of was. You know what I mean?? Well I hope this helps you.
Other than that I really enjoyed what I've read of your story so far. Keep it up! :)
Other than that I really enjoyed what I've read of your story so far. Keep it up! :)
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snicker snicker* I liked the \"who\'s the manly man now?\" part, it was hilarious!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent! I loved the bit with Yue... and oh gods, those two are just so *cuuuuuute*! Squeeeeeeeeeee! I just wanna huggle both of them...
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this, but it would be more in character if you\'d said just \"Yuki.\" Part of the Touya/Yuki relationship is that they never use formalities or suffixes with each other\'s names. -chan makes me think of school girls x.x
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee... I was hoping she\'d walk in on them in the living room or find a piece of clothing they\'d forgotten....
I liked the part with the \"manly man\"/Yue competition, there. Funny.
I liked the part with the \"manly man\"/Yue competition, there. Funny.
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thjs is a great story so far. I hope you write more and soon! It can\'t end there! It just can\'t! I (and I\'m sure other fans would agree with me) need more Touya and Yukito action!! And maybe a bit of some Sakura and Syaoran action too =b I love those pairings and I can never get enough!!!
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii!! Please tell me when the next chapter comes, this was so cute. I\'ve suddenly found a fedish for Yaoi-I...*looks down blushing* I can\'t help it, it\'s just so cute! *blush* Please update soon!
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very cute!
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very kawaii. Yukito and Touya are just so cute together, ne? And that was a pretty cute scene of Sakura and Syoroan (sp?) Great work! ^^