rate_review Reviews

Dude. It's been five years. Either update or give it to someone else.

Please update. I know it's been a long time but it really is an amazing story.

i love you work. this story amazing and i love the developing relationships as it continues. (Though honestly, i want more of ShuxRanxYouji). Your attention to detail is superb. i particularly like Hakuryuu.

i do have one point though, when Gojyo starts calling Sanzo 'anata'. You are /kinda/ right about the meaning, but it's old school and not common anymore. It's also female. And Gojyo speaks very masculinely. [He refers to himself as 'ore' as do Sanzo and Goku, but for 'you' he uses 'omee' rather than 'omae', or 'temee' when he's pissed.] While Sanzo can use proper Japanese, Hakkai is the only one who does regularly.

Yeah, it's a little thing but i live in Japan and speak Japanese so...

I have greatly enjoyed your most recent Saiyuki works, but I'm rather hoping that at some point you will find the time and inspiration to continue this wonderful story. You must admit, you've left us hanging in a rather cruel position. What ever becomes of Nataku and his secrets? Does Sanzo ever fess up to the origami? And when does everyone come clean to everyone else about their bed partners? (The last would presumably be 'at the end of the story,' which at the given rate would probably be somewhere around chapter sixty...)

Just a little note to let you know the story is still being read and enjoyed and more chapters would, as always, be appreciated.

~ Sarah

Right now I'm only on chapter 8, and it's already amazing. I can't wait to see whats next!

Ah wonderful! Thank you for that. It's all good, everyone makes mistakes every now and again.

Oh, Goku... You're so funny. XD

Hello. I actually just made an account so I could ask you a question: why is chapter 31 not posted on AFF? I don't remember the exact title but it was "something Epiphany." I was just wondering.

Love this story, love the Lost Cadre, and I can't wait for Balancing Karma. If it does end up getting picked up to be published I will definitely be purchasing. =)

- Blaike

Fantastic chapter keep up the good work.

Yay! So happy to see that you're still working on this one.

I really enjoyed reading this and hope it isn't over yet, because yea! the entire group is back together! Plus I'm really wondering about how Nataku ended up as a Magpie and if he'll ever get back to his true form. He was such a great character.

Hopefully there will be more, cause I really wanna see how this all ends!