rate_review Reviews

Oh dear god. You HAVE to do the threesome thing, I demand it! Ack!

*Whimpers* That was so hoooooottt...

...X.X

I just fell in love with my friend for linking me to your stories.

Lol, PLEASE do the threesome! And have Hakkai/Sanzo double-team Gojyo for the lust he keeps building up in them. (Ooh. Nice image, VERY nice image!) Hee!

THIS WAS AWSOME!! I love this series, but please, OH GOD PLEASE, don't make a threesome with hakkai. Please don't. I heart my happy Gojyo/Sanzo Smut/Fluff too much for that. Please write more!

This is such a great series!!
I love it!! The smut is so hott...

A threesome with Hakkai is a good idea. ^^ Please continue!

Love your works so much!


<3 Pocky-chan <3

In the beginning Sanzo was sounding a little on the whining side, which does not fit the Sanzo we all know and love. It almost sounds like Sanzo hates women or has no respect for them, is this what you’re looking for in his character? The comment about “Go off with some fu …. female he just met in the bar.” “How dare he sneak into my room and watch me jerk off to fantasies of him when he’d been out screwing some woman.” The phrase “Some woman” makes Sanzo look bad. Make you feel like maybe he doesn’t like women at all or is he suppose to be feeling jealous? Then you put it together that it is jealousy.

Then the story flows all the way to the end. It’s nice to see Sanzo being a little caring and he seems to be hooked on Gojyo. Sanzo having feelings for someone bothers him and I think that hold true to the real Sanzo. Gojyo is a pain in the ass that likes to torment people but seems to give in to Sanzo a little too easily. It doesn’t seem like the real Gojyo, who is annoying but who likes to flirt and have his way with anyone, as long as they don’t get to close. He doesn’t want anyone to get attached because he’s afraid they will resent him like his step mother did. Does he give into Sanzo because of the way he feels for Sanzo or is it because he feels Sanzo has been neglected when it comes to sex? And what are his feelings? Does he have them for Sanzo or not?

Don’t get me wrong I love the story and I am enjoying every minute of this tale and will all the way to the end (which I hope will never come).

oooh, don't have Hakkai join in! Plz, let him be just a voyuer,lol. can't wait for the next installment.

Oh god, it's an end of an era. well, it was good while it lasted, now we have to deal with plot to the smut. well, i can't wait, i say. bring on the plot. I'm ready for a story but please, the random smut was sooooooo good. damn, now there has to be a story.
Oh well.

Oooh, new flavor with a different POV, but hey... it works. And dost mine eyes deceive me? Or is *plot* slinking its sneaky butt in here? =D Great job!! Definitely love this series, please continue.
Hmm... wonder what crawled up Sanzo's butt, anyway? It can't be the spanking, right? I mean, he liked it... he even said so *wink* (Yep, my plot radar is going crazy!)
~Cory

Yes, folks...it's official. This collection of smut has a plot now. I tried, really I did, to keep this as a collection of random, smut filled, encounters. But Sanzo and Gojyo had their own ideas about what they wanted and the war was on. It took them 4 or 5 fics to wrestle me to the mat (and boy was THAT fun *snicker*) but I have caved and tapped out.

Fear not. Sanzo isn't going to suddenly turn all lovey-dovey and chibi-eyed. Gojyo isn't going to start making cow-eyes at Sanzo. Keeping these guys in character as much as possible is important to me and neither thing would happen with Sanzo or Gojyo. This is not the end of this serial. I do have detailed, plotted out, fics for 5 more beyond this one and rough ideas for another 5. Dar is doing his job as smut demon and the ideas keep filtering in. The feedback on this serial has been beyond anything I ever expected to get and I thank you all who have taken the time to leave me word. It means a great deal to me that I have entertained all of you so much.

Ah...the Hakkai issue. Seems some of you want him to do more than watch and some of you want him to leave Sanzo and Gojyo in peace. If you have read any of my other stuff posted here on AFF, then you alread know I have a real soft spot for 3-way action. That isn't to say it will happen...just that there is a possibility.

Ok, this was very hot and I loved it but please give me a good Goyjo and Hakkai, and make it hot and i will love you forever.