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person ariesgirl
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! im so glad you updated! and two chapters so soon together too
theyre both amazing ^^
Hakkai s so smart, im really happy that he’s figuring it all out,
and Sanzo and Gojyo are doing really well too
im a total sucker for happy endings
Please update soon

p.s. i LOVE you!!!!
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
that was by far one of the best chapters so far!
i dont know why....but for some reason i love it when sanzos sick and gojyo is the one to care for him!
i have to say....this story is extremely well written....and i enjoy reading each and every word!
i cant wait to read more!
hope youll update soon! ^.^
person ReiZero
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This amde me so happy I almost cried!!! I'm really starting to love this pairing. <3 And of course it was beutifully writen! <3 I hope you up-date soon!! I check evry day to see if you've up-dated this story!! I really do love it!!! Oh and poor Sanzo, getting sick...being human has got to suck1!! At lest he had Gojyo to care for him..and Goku..but that different!^^ Up-date soon!!!
person Cupnjava
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I LOVE this pairing and you work them so beautifully. I had a wonderful snicker at this point.

“Quite frankly, I was terrified that something happened to you. I looked for you, you know. I’ve rarely felt that afraid. Please don’t do that again, Hakuryuu.”

In my mind I saw Hakkai lifting his index finger. "Remember, Hakuryuu, the last time my lover went missing over 1,000 people died. Let's not repeat that, shall we?" Insert sickening sweet Hakkai smile here followed by Hakuryuu feeling the urge to count the population of the town.

BIG HUGS AND KISSES TO YOU! Another wonderful installment! Yes, indeed. SQUEEEEE!!!
person gretel_chan
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter. I'm enjoying the storyline with Hakkai and Hakryuu. The really lovely thing is how you weave in very striking parts of the other characters while focusing on the main pairing. I love Goku and Gojyo's interactions in the early parts of the chapter - seeing the "everyday" of the characters adds so much depth.
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!
another AMAZING chapter!
im so in love with this story!...(i say that every time i god damn review.....^.^)
..o well...still mean it with all my heart, soul, mind, and everything else that i have....^.^
once again i cant wait for the next chapter....i die waiting to read more of this story every time ^.^
i hope you update soon! ^.^
person jarm
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooooo glad you are back with this one. Hope all is well on your end.
person nimblnymph
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for an update on this for what seems like forever. The only thing I can say constructively is that you're brilliant, and this is beautifully sexy. I do feel bad that Goku's not getting any fun, but this is perfect on it's own. Thank you.
person ariesgirl... again
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
right so i was rereading this for the millionth time
and i randomly thought of something
what if Hakkai randomly decided to take a bath and Hakuryuu randomly snuck in
i donno
you dont have to put it in there or anything cuz you probly already have a set story line right?
but if you feel like it, that would be awesome

please update soon
person draelynn
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Killing... me... with each and every chapter. All the little innovative touches to each and every character. Sentimental Gojyo. Fierce yet highly damaged Sanzo. Protective Hakkai. And not-so-dumb Goku. Yep. My head's gonna explode. *glomps pitifully like a fangirl* Thankyouthnakyouthankyou....

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