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person ReiZero
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeee!!! I really love Hakkai/Hakuryu now!!! It's so god damn hot! *drools* Really loved this chapter!!! Teehee! Alley sex is hot!!! Up-date soon!
person gretel_chan
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you posted more of this pairing. Well done as always, and I really grinned at Hakkai's parting shot to Gojyo.
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was sooooooo fucking HOT!!!
i love your story soooooooooooo much! ^.^
i cant wait to read more!...especially more gojyoxsanzo!
please hurry and update!
im DYING to know what happens next between both hakkai and hakuryu and gojyo and sanzo! ^.^
person bluesnake40
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yah, another chapt ... I am really enjoying your pairing of Hakuryuu/Hakkai and the development of their relationship. You've managed to give the dragon such human characteristics and liked how you've handled his transformation into a human yet with his dragon characteristics. Can't wait to see how things develop and what's going to happen on the Sanzo/Gyojo front. May this fic continue with many, many chapts still to come!
person Chizuko
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful as usual. please continue soon!
person Basthet
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter a lot. It's so very cute.
I always ask myself what Dragon would sound like.

Did you make up that whole story about Hakuryu's past or have you read somewhere that he was someone else in heaven too?
I ask that because some of my friends and I, had wondered how Hakkai had got Hakuryu, even some time before we've read this chapter.

I totally love this fanfiction. Uo to now I've read so many fanfictions in English and German and for me this one is is defenitely one of the best. And it's the best Saiyuki-fic I ever read.

By the way, I like the way how you describe Hakkais and the effect he has on others. He always seems to be a bit threatening. That's really good. I believe he really is like that. And I believe it even more since I've seen him as a full Youkai without his controlers on. (you can see him and his abilities in part 7 of Saiyuki Reload, when he fights an outraged Goku)
person Crimson
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a facinating idea. I really liked this. I despise Gojyo and Sanzo, but I can set that aside for the marvelously unique idea that centered this fic. Awesome.
person chizuko
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this fic for a while and I love it too death. It's so hot, s passionate. And This chapter I have to say is the coolest and most uniquie idea I have ever read. I love sanzo and Gojyo. But incoperating Hakkaryu as a reincarnate of heaven is the coolest. It is true from the legend that the dragon god accompanied Sanzo's group and could take human form as well as a horse. With Kazuya minekura's jeep version though Hakkaryu's story isn't mentioned. I love your Idea and this fic is not only the hotest smut ut a beautiful story. I very much like your works. Thanks so much for this chapter and please continue updating. I got to go review the next chapter (i've been away so I have to catch up on reading all the chapters)~~An adoring fan
person dark_Angel
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. So sweet. And the past lives with Hakuryuu and Hakkai was really good too. =) Update soon!!!
person DrkDreamer
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Always love Gojyo being abused...

Excellent story!

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