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for The FIRST lain fic

by HaibokuIchigo

schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should really continue writing this...it is rather interesting with Lain. I could see a little tension between the two, well more of a one-sided thing. Arisu towards Lain. A crush if you will. Seeing as how this is one of the only fics I have seen with Lain I would appreciate more.
person ImasukyLomae
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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With love; Imasuky Lomae
person Unknown
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pls update soon
person Fallen
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF? You just posted this to have the \"rights\" to the first AFF Lain fanfic. You didn\'t even take the time to produce a decent chapter. The moderators should delete this \"story\" due to your laziness.
person Fallen
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF? You just posted this to have the \"rights\" to the first AFF Lain fanfic. You didn\'t even take the time to produce a decent chapter. The moderators should delete this \"story\" due to your laziness.
person Andrius
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL. 2 lines and you call htat a fanfic?
person Wolfboy1988
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way to go on starting the first Serial Experiments: Lain fic! I might write on after I watch my DVDs again so I can come up with a good fic plot and everything.
person RiderND
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooo short ! barely counts as a prologe
person Boo
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You wrote the first Lain fanfic!! I\'m surprised... I guess not many people watch Lain...I do. I love it. I\'m glad someone decided to write a fanfic!!
A yuri at that...Yum. Well, write more soon. A great start!
person DS
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not much of a fan of \"off the top of your head\" works, but since this IS the first SEL story here, I\'m going to see how this turns out. I\'m hoping for a good one. Maybe with a little Alice/Chisa as well? Please?

- DS

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