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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whay the fuck you have to kil her
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and new idea for fanfic. Its very good! you should be proud at doing something new.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a sad, tragic, but truly beautiful ending. Excellent job!!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story Ryoko-San! I don\'t watch the series but I pretty much got the gist.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Merle!! She\'s alwasys being hurt at every turn. Its not fair for her to be punished like this. If anyone it should be Van for abandoning her and Hitomi for taking away what should have been hers to begin with!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, kind of angsty(is that a word?) for me but can\'t wasit to see what happens next
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. Please continue! Your stlye of writing is cool! I\'m enjoying this!!
Keep on Writin\'
Reviewer #34321
Keep on Writin\'
Reviewer #34321
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY would you feel sorry for Hitomi?
I feel desperately sorry for Merle, but Hitomi?
Great story Ryoko, UPDATE SOON!
I feel desperately sorry for Merle, but Hitomi?
Great story Ryoko, UPDATE SOON!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Hitomi...
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story your writing keep it up and can\'t wait to see what happens. Even though I wished that Van would stay with Merle and forget all about Hitomi.