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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I love this story. You\'re doing a super job! Great story line and character devolopment (esp. for Brad... that made my day). And don\'t worry about the language mistakes... you\'re such a sweetie ^^ I\'m very interested to see what happens with poor lil\' Omi in the next chapter...
=D Keep up the good work
=D Keep up the good work
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! I started laughing when I read the \"OC\'s\" names. Muraki from Yami no Matsuei and JJ from FAKE. Very cute!
I\'m looking forward to this fic. There simply aren\'t enough fics about Omi!
I\'m looking forward to this fic. There simply aren\'t enough fics about Omi!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rather interesting...I\'ve always enjoyed the \"Kidnapp Omi\" plot-lines...Is it me or does that lil\' cutie just scream, \"HEY PERVERTS! C\'MN GET ME! I\'M EASIER THAN PONG!\"
Kidnapping Nagi\'s also a plus...But mentally, I think I\'ll keep picturing the first season Omi look. Gluhen sucked ass in the design department, I don\'t care who says otherwise. But involving the good doc from YNM is a sweet touch, do I smell a crossover or issat Chipotle Chocolate Cookies baking? Please continue this story.
Kidnapping Nagi\'s also a plus...But mentally, I think I\'ll keep picturing the first season Omi look. Gluhen sucked ass in the design department, I don\'t care who says otherwise. But involving the good doc from YNM is a sweet touch, do I smell a crossover or issat Chipotle Chocolate Cookies baking? Please continue this story.