rate_review Reviews

I\'ve read most of your other stuff, but haven\'t left reviews for them (yet ;) ). It\'s just that this one has finally managed to reduce me into hysterical laughter. Man oh man, the closet and the flu - that was just hilarious!

Gojyo X Sanzo is just the HOTTEST pairing ^_^ and I\'m really glad that you captured some of their character bickerings well... Yea, the cutesy \"baby / angel / lover\" is very OOC, but you should be entitled to your own fancy ;)

Now, on to the next installment...

Great fic!! I so loved it! Love the sex part too. I think it was real hot. And the way Gojyo and Sanzo say they love each other and call each other \'angel\' and \'baby\' is just so sweet and cute!! I also like the way they compete with each other on who loves the other more. That\'s real sweet. And I also like the qoute Gojyo says. I think it does pertain to them. Hope yopu write more 53 fics. Can\'t wait to read more of your stories!

That was the best romance story out off all Gensomaden Saiyuki fan fiction in the world! You truly deserve an applause and gratitude.
kisses,
mirage
P.S. Write soon again.

Oh, yeah, one more thing. To the two prevous reviewers, I totally don\'t agree, and I read lots of OOC stories. If everyone thinks that the only romance fics with Sanzo in them are supposed to be violent and sad like some prevoius ones like \"The Maze\" or \"Waiting For the Night ... to Fall\", than you all suck. Can\'t even Sanzo once in a while fall in love and just be happy? And by the way, the \"angel\" and \"baby\" thing was totally cute. Also, Sanzo isn\'t completely out of character since he only acts differently around Gojyo.
Great story, I would totally recommend it to anyone who loves yaoi Saiyuki, and good luck!
mirage

I agree with Banjo, in less words. Lol, you\'re addicted to pet names, aren\'t you? Otherwise, this was one of your better ones. The pet names- yes, I\'m going to gripe over those, lol- got on my nerves a lot, and so did the random Japanese, but your characterization is getting a bit better. Check out that link Banjo gave you, it DOES help out.

The closet sex was good, but honestly - Sanzo calling Gojyo \"baby\"? Gojyo calling Sanzo \"baby\" or \"angel\" without getting shot? The two of them having cutesy arguments over who has more twoo luv for the other? Could they BE any more out of character? I\'ve read a few of your fics now, and this seems to be pretty much par for the course. Maybe this form will help: http://www.eclectics.com/articles/character.html Filling that out should give you a better idea of how a character will react to things. Also, give it a rest with the fangirl japanese. It\'s jarring, it\'s annoying, and it automatically brings my opinion of any fanfiction down by a few notches.