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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story it is really good so far.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
maybe it's just cause i haven't read them in a while, but it doesn't seem that OOC to me.....
good fic ^_^
there HAS to be more to it tho! Ororon's not gonna stay put. certainly not if they put him back on the throne (which is where Othello wanted him i think).
& what about chiaki? as much as i LOOOOOOVE OthelloxOroron, he wouldn't just let her go & vice versa i think.
WRITE MORE!!!
good fic ^_^
there HAS to be more to it tho! Ororon's not gonna stay put. certainly not if they put him back on the throne (which is where Othello wanted him i think).
& what about chiaki? as much as i LOOOOOOVE OthelloxOroron, he wouldn't just let her go & vice versa i think.
WRITE MORE!!!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it plz write more!! i have always wanted to read a story like this one and its the first i have managged to fine pleas dont leave if off like this!!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MINNNNX! You really /ARE/ A MINX. Evil! ;__; You must write more, this story is so hott. <33 YOU OWE IT TO ME FOR DITCHING ME ANYWAY. And why is the thought of a crying Ororon such a delectable image to have? Mmm.. With Othello on top of him. Yes, that is a brilliant, brilliant mental image, love. Wah! You're so good at writing, I'm jealous! ;__; <33 @ you
BUT I MEAN IT. WRITE MORE.
(and you're the one with all the awesome ideas of incest, and yaoi, and muahaha. <3)
BUT I MEAN IT. WRITE MORE.
(and you're the one with all the awesome ideas of incest, and yaoi, and muahaha. <3)
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
- Coughs. - Let's try this again! I said that you need to write MORE, and that this story ROCKS, and that you're the brilliant one who's insanely good with the twincest and rape and torture-ororon plot bunnies. Yuuuuusss! YOU OWE ME MORE STORY ANYWAY. It's what you get for BETRAYING ME by leaving me all alone. Wah! What am I going to do without you? ANYWAY. Write more, derm it! You're such a brilliant author! Fweee! =3
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ororon.. *pats it*
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy, thank you Clam. Error fixed!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, um...
"The feeling of his clock slipping past Ororon's lips and deep into his mouth was almost too much," *highlights "clock" and giggles* Yea, it was awesome dude, I think you ought to add more. ^^ But the clock typo...distracted from the mood. lol Well done.
"The feeling of his clock slipping past Ororon's lips and deep into his mouth was almost too much," *highlights "clock" and giggles* Yea, it was awesome dude, I think you ought to add more. ^^ But the clock typo...distracted from the mood. lol Well done.