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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaaaw man!!!!!!! this is so gooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Extremely well-written! I loved it! ^_^
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the lemon. It was good.
However, you completely killed the yuri for me when Minako talked about the people she slept with.
Only several dates?? Three people?? Why did she have to sleep with them?? Why not go immediately
after Rei if she loved her?? Why not share the first time together??
Sorry for the complaints, but I'm a yuri-fanatic who doesn't enjoy hearing about hetero in yuri.
How about writing a yuri-only version of this story? Or another one?
But other than that, I liked your characterizations. Sorry to be a wet blanket.
However, you completely killed the yuri for me when Minako talked about the people she slept with.
Only several dates?? Three people?? Why did she have to sleep with them?? Why not go immediately
after Rei if she loved her?? Why not share the first time together??
Sorry for the complaints, but I'm a yuri-fanatic who doesn't enjoy hearing about hetero in yuri.
How about writing a yuri-only version of this story? Or another one?
But other than that, I liked your characterizations. Sorry to be a wet blanket.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was rather good! Good job on this!