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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes please continue
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Congratulations Ryo, that was your first orgasm' LOL XD it was a bit odd... but I love slave fics, so continue please!! I wanna know how it goes on...
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Hurry up and update, you! I want to see what you\'ll do with this, add another chapter!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Trainspottahh's review. This sounds like Happerberry's Greek Love. I really was not buying this as a story more of a brainstorm still needing a lot of editing to it. There is a lot of confussion going on that would leave the readers confused.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
verry imteresting update soon
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great first chapter!!! Please continue!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm honestly very confused... Ryo is a slave but this is set in modern times? Umm... slavery is illegal?
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I honestly think it needs work. Less dialouge. It also sounds like a take on Happyberry's Greek Love.