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for Protector

by mysticowl

schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I know Shin is her brother, at this point knowing how hot he is. I don't care. Please write more Shin and Maya stories.
person yychan
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very good piece..
i'm always a great fan of them together. It is a pity that they're not.
Good one, can u write more of them (smut)???
person Oztan
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should keep going with this.
person KatDiva
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this pairing alot... because of it's intensity and because of the guilt that they both feel. I think Maya would have been much more hestitant, as she has always tried to keep Shin at bay, even though she knows how he feels about her. Still, this works. It was a tad rushed, but it works. Thank you. I am not sure how long ago it was written, but I enjoyed reading it.
person Randomized-Data
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your FFict, was described beautifully.
Not only did it capture, the pure essence of Shin and Maya's "Relationship"
It has inspired me to write! ...So i think i shall. Maybe...?
person vicious-sky
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm that was pretty good, Im currently downloading episode 15 as I read this. Would you be willing to write any other fanfiction? If so please contact me!
person nixling
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did an extremely good job of portraying the characters. I especially like how you incorporated Shin's change (the slitting of his eyes, etc) into the work. It shows how much Maya influenced his changes.

Personally I think there was something going on between them, whether it actually became sexual or not. However its never really approached in the series, so its all how you interpret the text.

You did an excellent job. I hope you continue to write more Tenge Tengo fanfiction.
person Weaver
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read the 4th manga, and I was definitely getting come hints between Shin and Maya. I guess I'm not the only one who thinks they have a deeper relationship than just brother and sister.
person Jaded Neko
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A nice look on the very close relationship between Maya and Shin. I too don't know if anything really went on between them, but from watching the anime and reading the mangas it's easy to think that something might have. Kudos on adding that line about Shin promising to protect Maya. Loved it.

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