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I beg you to write more of this. Its been sooooo long a wait for an update. Please continue this.

Oh, phooey! It's over already? D: Damn... Ah, well. As usual, your writing had me so engrossed I stayed up most of the night reading this. You really know how to spin a tale! And Lordy, do I love your original characters! Zesiro's a total doll XD Granted, a psychotic, sex-crazed, thoroughly dangerous doll, but nonetheless... He just pushes all the right crazy-buttons, I guess :D

Man, I'd give my left leg to read more of this story, but I doubt you'd appreciate a severed limb so instead I'm gonna try and bribe you with homemade espresso-chocolate cupcakes... Pretty please, write some more of this if you get a chance? :3

OH MY! I think that there is another threesome in the near future, at least a potential one between Akando, Jolen & Katze. I think this living situation is definitely getting interesting. I have 1 question though, is Ejnar a Blondie or Cadre reject? I, for the life of me can't figure out why he has such a grudge against the AI or the Cadre. He certainly sounds like he could be a Blondie off his rocker. I totally love Jolen, he has me on the laugh box replacement list because I have worn my first one out [rolling on the floor laughing in pain]. Akando really needs to stop before he gets him and the other 3 Cadre shocked to death or at the very least loose a limb. (^.^)

Mingan & Sevilen, wow, I really would love to see the scene the Mingan has already decided on having. The 1 thing I love more than ANK & its spin offs is ROLE PLAY GAMES. {*.*}

Raoul & Zesiro, I missed them in this chapter, they give a serious case of nose bleeds ;) but I really don't mind. Is there another tryst in the working for Hakhan and those two sex-crazed lovers? XD

Iason & Riki, I can see that they will be in the story more already, but will the have a lovers endeavor with Mingan & Sevilen? I hope so I can see that getting VERY interesting. (fanning myself from the sudden heat I just felt)O_o

Anyway THANK YOU for continuing the story. I didn't think you would because of how long ago the last chapter was published, although I DID bookmark your story in the chance that you may pick up where you left off. I look forward to the next chapter. {*x*}

Hey! Miracle! A new chapter...since...i got no idea. Just happy to see you back with another one, because as I'm already said before, your fic is great.
I though the dancing part was going to be a little longer, but no matter what it was hilarious!!! Poor Akando, just as Jolen planed in the previous chapter: see but no touching. Jijijijiji.
Is nice to see Katze here, i kind of miss him in your fic, but apparently you are going to use all the regular characters besides the new ones. At other hand...Sevilen is so cute! Asking with his puppy eyes for Riki to visit him or him visiting Riki. He just sound like a kid asking his mother to bring his friends over...>///< Of course, the feelings of Mingan for him are everything but that of a mother...-_-'''
Well, hope to read you soon.
PD: when is jolen let akando touch besides see? jujujuju

I know that you haven't written on this story for a while and I don't even know if you'll get this review, but I just have to say how much I loved your story. I also know that you have a ton of other stories posted, and doubt that you'll consider completing this 1.

Anyway onto the review. This story is totally awesome. I can't tell you how hilarious it is to see Sevilen battling with his over active sex drive. Although it had some really really really really good sex scenes nothing was as good as Seeing Akando have his ass handed to him and Mingan getting shell shocked just because he was linked as well. As a total AnK fan, I truly love the story revolving around people other than Riki, Iason, Guy, Katze, & Raoul. Its even better to see tight ass Raoul involved in endless sex and ROUGH sex at that, and the best part of it all he's the freaking' UKE (the bottom, the M in the S&M team (nose bleeds by envisioning Zesiro fucking Raoul into submission).

I am begging you to continue this story, I am anxious to see how Akando reacts to Jolen dressed all sexy like & if Sevilen will tell Mingan he wants a spanking ("vibrating in my seat with excess energy" in your words with a little twist Tee Hee). I look forward to reading your other works.

Just a note to say I love this--and love rereading it!

Your story is reallly brilliant.I hope you didn't abandon it, it's been a wile since the last update and I would be really devastated if you do so. Pleeeeaaaase go on!

OMG!!! Two new chapters--yes, it's been a long time since I checked for updates! Wow! So awesome! I love Jolen's scales! And his bitchin' mom! It's so cool that Sev. finding out about his dad. The transport thing was weird and confusing--why use a space ship then? Or was the first female the teleporter? Hmmmm . . .

Interesting elevator sex and very cute about Raol's furninture being so concerned.
I do love this story!

Oh how wonderful to see your story posted here on AFF, I used to read it on Kiramenu's website until everything went into chaos when Kira decided to take a different path with her writing. I was so sad thinking that I lost my chance to continue reading The Lost Cadre. It had been so long that I re-read it again. I love your characters they are too cute for words. Poor Raoul has no idea what he got himself into, but at least he is enjoying himself. I love Jolen he is going to drive Akando crazy, and yes in spite of Akando being full of himself it won’t hurt for him to learn a little humility, but he is cute in his own stubborn way. I hope Jolen puts him through his paces before he allows him to come near him (Hehe). Mingan such a wonderful character, I hope he will like living on Sevilen’s planet because that is the only place they can love and be themselves, can’t wait to see what happens next with them. Zesiro what a cool character, I love, love him and his big strong wild sexy swishing tail kind of hunk of hunk. Hakhan is so sweet and gentle I would love for Raoul to see him in a different light, the poor thing deserves to be treated well and he should be loved. So glad to see that you are still writing this story and I so look forward to reading more, thanks so much for being in AFF and for your wonderful story.

Hey it's really good this fic. I've read until chapter 2 so far...keep going!!!
Both characters are really sexy!!!