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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's good to know that you're still alive and that you haven't abandoned this story. =) It's been months since I first read it but this last chapter reminded me of exactly what I love about it. Zesiro, I missed seeing him in action, hehe. And I have to admit that I'm anxious to see the whole Jolen/Akando bit played out. Don't wait another 6 months for an update please. =)
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG AN UPDATE! YEAY! Dances. I keep thinking you might have abandoned it the updates take. Anyway update again soon. Cause this story rocks.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't beleive you updated! I was really starting to give up on this story but I love it so much and I just had to keep checking back. Thank you so much for continueing it. I loved the scene with Jupiter, and I can't wait to see where you take it next.
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Akando is an absolute ass who can't take no for an answer... Jolen and Zesiro are hilarious though. When Zesiro told Jolen that his mom wanted pictures I could almost see Jolen pale in fright starring wide eyed at Zesiro. I am also willing to bet that Jolen's scales are really pretty. (as you can tell I have way to much time to imagine stuff). I can't wait to see more fights between Jolen and Akando and maybe some more fights between Akando ans Zesiro. Also, the Awh'anise are freaking awesome. You should seriously consider doing an original(yaoi) fic just on their race and culture. I'd love to read that. Please update soon!!! Pretty please!! I'll bake cookies!!
Ganbatte!!
Ryn
Ganbatte!!
Ryn
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story in a long time that had me cackling in delight as I read it, anxious to turn the page to see what would happen next. Zesiro has got to be one of the best characters I've ever had the pleasure of reading about in a long time. I love everything about him, his personality, his appearance (which reminds me of a redheaded Grimmjow in pantera form btw =p)
It's not just the beautiful original characters you've created, the story itself has so much merit, it's not just sex (though the sex is quite brilliant) but there's a deep underlying plot that makes me can't wait to see how it all turns out. Don't put this one on the back burner, you've got a real winner here.
It's not just the beautiful original characters you've created, the story itself has so much merit, it's not just sex (though the sex is quite brilliant) but there's a deep underlying plot that makes me can't wait to see how it all turns out. Don't put this one on the back burner, you've got a real winner here.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, Iron Dog.
You are awsome!!!! XD This story is WONDERFUL!! I wish it was part of the actual story!! I wish it was an anime!! I wanna see what Zeshiro-sama really looks like!! =D. You are a brillant writer. I was beyond thrilled when I saw that your next chapter had been put up. I read the whole thing again! Twice! OH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! XD XD XD!!!
~Zeshiro
You are awsome!!!! XD This story is WONDERFUL!! I wish it was part of the actual story!! I wish it was an anime!! I wanna see what Zeshiro-sama really looks like!! =D. You are a brillant writer. I was beyond thrilled when I saw that your next chapter had been put up. I read the whole thing again! Twice! OH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! XD XD XD!!!
~Zeshiro
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story with lots of very well realized OCs. I like Zesiro; he's amusing and so very forward. :P The story line is captivating, I can't wait to learn more about the cadre and the death threats against Mingan. And I love the fact that you're only using Iason and Riki as secondary characters, since I felt when watching the anime that the ending was the only one possible for that bittersweet pair. Kudos.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and have been following it for so long. I lost track of it when Kira's site went down and thought that I would never get to read more. So I found it agian by mistake browsing AFF, I'm so glad you are still keeping up with the story and on a site that I hope never goes away. I love the characters and I look forward to reading more of your work. thanks so much, great story and cannot wait to see where you take the characters. Poor Mingin is in love, the big dummy should be more gentle and loving to his pet if he really wants to win his heart. Can't wait to see how the bigger dummy Akando will win over Jolen, oh I can just see more fun in the horizen. ah will Jolen also have the heat hit him? hummmm how interesting would that be if all he would have is the stubborn Akando to help him hehehe
Jewel
Jewel
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great Update! You forgot to change the description, so it looks like you didn't add a new chapter, but fortunately I wanted to reread a bit! Great new twists! I'll have to hit your website and see how the Weiss story is going, too. Wonderful!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so glade you updated this story. I absolutely love it! I was really worried you'd abandoned it and seeing the update really made my day. This is one of my all time favs, please keep it coming!
Ethereal
Ethereal