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for The Lost Cadre

by greywitch

person llyoung
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I'm really enjoying it. Thanks for the update.
person ethereal
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you wrote more! This is one of my favorite stories, and I was so happy to see it updated. I love your interpretations of the canon characters, as well as your original characters. Please write more soon!

Ethereal
person Gegi88
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Thank God u did a new chapter! I love ur story write more please!!
person Hestia
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you!!!!

Wonderful! It looks like you are really moving on the plot now, too! I'm hoping you will update soon, but I understand how hard it is to find time to write.

I can't wait for the dance!! And the toy!! And Hakkun getting more courage as well . . .

I like the pool, and I like how Sevilen is realizing he is particularly attracted to Mingon, not just any cadre member.

Another great lemon, too!

Awesome!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!!!

And well, worth the wait. You know of course that you have just managed too tease me into an almost tittering state with this chappie. Please don't leave me sitting on hot coals for too long this time!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love the whole idea of this fic. I was a little hesitant to read it because of the OC characters but I've grown attatched to them while reading it. Can't wait untill you post more.
person Ryu
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Iron I loved ur story especially the introduction of ur 2 most interesting n captivating characters.. zesiro n mingan..m sure ppl who hv never heard of ai no kusabi wud naturally think that these 2 characters really exist..well done! u have a very good flair for writing please continue to capture the minds of the readers..tke care

Ryu (^_^)
person Hestia
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I hope you haven't forgottent this story--please update soon! I love the Hakkun story! Great stuff! Thanks for posting!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I love your originals. As always, strong personality and plot development, and I was dragged in despite not being a fan of Ai no Kusabi. Nothing of any real value to say, just great job and I'll be stalking you even more avidly now. *L*
person Weirkat
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, and it's so wonderful to find others writing for AnK. Thanks!

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