rate_review Reviews

I just want to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. In the first couple of chapters I was disappointed that you were focusing more on your own characters than on Iason and Riki. Then Mingan, Sevilen, Hakhan and especially Zesiro started to grow on me. I LOVE Zesiro! What a troublemaker. I love his fangs, his purr, and his wonderful tail. I just finished chapter 9 and I can't wait to find out what happens next. This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. It's probably going to be as long as a novel by the time you finish. I first discovered you on Kira's site, but I couldn't review there, so I'm glad I found you here. You write well and have the gift of making your readers care about your characters. Please don't leave Hakhan behind in his lonely life when Zesiro leaves to follow the action. I want him to have some tenderness after everything he's been through.

Thank you for writing such an enjoyable and fascinating story.

oh wow that chapter was good and long and i injoy it and can not wait for more like that . i hope that you havesome more of riki and iason to rauol and the z was hot hot and with the boy was hot too be waitting for more chapter .

FINALLYYYYYYYY AN UPDATE!!!!!! *cries with happiness* Lol =P yay. I'm starting to see this story as more of an original rather than a Fanfic, because your story revolves around your own characters rather than the characters in Ai no Kusabi...which is awesome. =) Keep going!

so very happy to see 9 was up.It was very good.

love the story and you are doing good job on it ahd i love the way that you have the pets try to have sexand the masters stop them and they are to flight and that the one guy who is in with rauol is cool and i love it moremoremoremomreo

Oh wow so very good

yay! new chapter! ^_^
i love this story! its so0 damn go0d!! i cant wait for the next chapter!! o0h: i hope u liked
the drawing i sent you:P and if i have timee... i'll se if i can send u another one (n_n)

lots of love

squid.boy

I love this story, it's so well written and makes me anticipate what comes next. The original characters surly brings the storyline to life. I really like the relationships and can't wait to see how you develope them down the line. I can't also wait to see what happens if you let Sevilen and the delegate meet.

Just so there is no question... there is just me and my twisted imagination for this little endevour. Well, my betas for this as well (who rock by the way) but I'm the only writer for this. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far. In case anyone is curious, Zesiro mentions his brother Zivon. You can find Zivon in my Sinn's Rune novel (posted here on AFF as well). That is a het pairing so you were warned if that isn't your cup of tea.

I know chapter 5 was violent and brutal. It needed to be to get things where I want/need them to go. I don't do things without a reason, so while it was a rather nasty thing of me to have Mingan rape Sevilen, it does have a purpose.

I'm having a bucket of fun with these guys and I'm unbelievably pleased that it has gotten such good reception considering it isn't an Iason/Riki fic and these guys are completely original characters. Thank you for the reviews and I am working away on the next chapter of Cadre.

Chapter 6. I'm enthralled. You have one hell of a plot going here! Add a little nose-bleed here and there and this certainly rocks. I'm looking forward to the next instalment eagerly.
For some reason, this old nursery rhyme keeps ocurring to me while I read your work...
"Elizabeth, Elspeth, Betsy, and Bess,
They all went together to seek a bird's nest;
They found a bird's nest with five eggs in,
They all took one, and left four in."

You have a wildly various approach to writing that I find very exhilarating! Like a roller coaster! Fascinating! ^-^