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Chapter 4. You know, you really write wonderful lemons! They're so energetic and very affecting! *fan fan*

Chapter 5. Wow. There's either more than one author for this story or you really sort of opened the throttle with this chapter! The alien is absolutely riveting! The mating fight between him and Raoul was intense, to say the least. And the hunt/post-hunt pieces with Mingan and Sevilen were just draining.
Really... the characters even seem different in this chapter... the other chapters were excellent but this one affected me like a slow-mo train wreck that I just could not look away from.
The violence and sadism is somewhat extreme in this part but I won't bullshit you and say I didn't enjoy a lot of it. There was equal squirm with the squick here. Very powerful writing.

Chapter 3. Wow. That was HOT. I really like dreams -- I very much liked the way you mixed lucid dreaming right along with a mental "home invasion". Can't wait to see what Raoul makes of his dream lover in person. He sounds like a real character. Mingan and vision boy were also very hot together. Ah, virgin sex! That wide-eyed-Bambi-in-the-forest quality is just irresistible, isn't it?
Enjoying this hugely! ^-^

“He can’t talk to you like that,” Riki muttered to Iason. “You’re the fucking head of the Syndicate.” When I read that, I realized you'd just sucked me right into your tale. I laughed out loud. I'm enjoying your story very much! I like Mingan a lot so far and I've got just dozens of questions about the little Pet with the visions. Thanks so much for publishing this. I look forward to the next chapters...

Woo, there really aren't words to describe how happy I was to find a completely unexpected AnK *AU* running around, and a long and recent one at that. You've just done a fabulous job of capturing the dark and sexual power dynamics of this universe, and all of your original characters are beautifully complex. (I love Sevilen. But you know that - *everyone* must love Sevilen, lovely strong-broken little thing that he is. Guh.)

*sighs* Like I needed another reason to be frantic for AFF to reopen... ah well, this one is going to be well worth waiting for. Can't thank you enough for writing it!

*gives standing novation* AWSOME! i loved it! i dont know why but i love the ruff wanted sex hehehe well once again i loved your story and am pissed off at myslef for reading it before it is done cause i cant wait till the next one even though i know its worth it hehehe i.m. when you get the next one out bye talk to yah later!

Amazing! This story is exceptionally well written and crafted. I usually stay away from alternate universes because authors change things so much (hence the alternate) that I might as well read an original, but I don't think this story is AU at all. I kind of see this story as an expansion of Riki and Iason's story, the focus shifting a bit. And the fact that you made the characteristics of the other-worlders fit in seamlessly with what we know of Amoi and Ai No Kusabi made this story especially enjoyable. I feel like I'm re-discovering the World of Ai No Kusabi once again, but on a different calibre. The relationship between Minigan and his pet, while sweet and complicated, is also delightfully delicious.

I look forward to reading more of this. Once again, great work!

Waa!!! I love it, I love it, I love it!!. And I love YOU for write this good and make de chaps soooo long!! *-*

Keep this fast!!.

Wow this is a damn good series! Well written very creative and of course sexy with smut. And boy do you crank out a lot of stories within the span of little more than a year. Jeesh your a writting machine. An extremely well oiled and perfect working one if I do say. God I don't see where you find all the time. Your amazing! You produce hevenly quality work with in what seems like a span seconds compared to how others update so sluggishly. It is plain to see your dedicated and love doing this because it shows in your writting style that it took lots of hard work, revisions and editing to be such a polished product. Anyway, well done and many thanks for writting such a wounderful story so far that seems to tickle my fancy to the point of tears. -Chizuko

Kyaa! I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!