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by madilayn

schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The review part: This is a great piece of yaoi/slash, and (be still my beating heart), I think she's just getting started.

I sure hope you plan to add more to this!!!! I feel about like those poor boys right about now, eager for more!

I've read a bunch of your stuff (here and elsewhere), and you write damn hot stuff. I've seen you come up with sex acts that never even occurred to me, which is...well, a new experience.

A lot of nice details, great dialogue, and poor Phil, he's not going to be getting any more Condor...
person Zoe
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If u dont finish this story, i will have to kill u. This is my favorite pairing of all time. Please finish its a great story! Jmjamwtjamjgtjadmjg ad -explodes- ah!

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