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for Depravity 1.0

by ffpandayaoi

person Solo
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Us fans neeed moree!!!

You're just about the only good Gravitation author out there!! You CANT leave us hanging *sniffles*

I want more kinky Yuki/Shu smex!! ;~;
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you. This story might just be the hottest thing I've ever read.
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Ive read this...what, 50 times? xD just as good every time. I read it on gurabation too.

WHen do u plan on updating ur main fic, deprivity? I was like "o.o" to see u updated on here, and that was on the 16th, so that means ur still alive!!!! ^_^;
person Travellyr
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FDUCKING GOD.

HEEEE HEE HEE HEE. XD I hope they all sit down with popcorn and DON'T tell Hiro what the movie is. n_____n Good friends are sadistic like that.
person Travellyr
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... *giggles madly* HEEEE. It's a very good scene, in writing or otherwise, that leaves you with a grin on your face and caught between the desire to sigh or to giggle!
I wasn't sure about this (chapter one) in the beginning, read it in bits and pieces while doing other things with the nervous tension of not being quite sure how to behave at a party... Read a paragraph or two, set some water on to boil, read another few lines, get up and dance to the computer's music... back and forth, back and forth, eventually staying with the story longer and longer until I had to make myself get up and tend to the stove, and finally coming back to read the last third in one long, sweet shot.
Oh, how sweet it is.
I'd held off reading this until now (I don't remember why), and now I had to make a very stern, conscious decision NOT to read the next part until later, because it's well past my bedtime and I could be persuaded into feeling guilty in the morning, er, afternoon. When I get up.
For a whole forty seconds until I remember WHY I was up so late when I had work to do the next day, and start giggling again.
So here's to giggling for reasons not shared while stripping wallpaper. ^^
Congratulations, from another Depravity fan.
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I thought for sure that it was Suguru instead of Shuichi! :D I knew someone else was there when Hiro realized the member he was sucking was not as big as he remembered Yuki being. WOW! After all that lusting Hiro did for Shuichi in Depravity, he finally got to be with him! :D Dream come true I guess! ;D What other delicious fantasies will you write next? Please, oh please, do something with K!! *drool* A KxRyu scene - I will pass out!! woohoo!! LOL!!
Koneko =^.^=
person Tina
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O My god, that was awesome. I like how you mysteriously added Shuichi into the scene. I thought it might have been Suguru but I'm glad it was Hiro's best friend with him in the scene. And Shuichi dominating Eiri after Hiro was knocked out for a lil bit caught me by surprise. Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

~*~Tina~*~
person Your Mom\'s Face
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*pouts*

You need to update.

Soon.

Please.

For my sanity, if nothing else.

That is all.

Toodles!!
person Your Mom\'s Face
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo!!

I love exhibitionism!!

...But I don\'t love HiroxShuichi.

Ich.

At least not when Yuki\'s in the picture. Ir there were a story where Shuichi never met Yuki, HxS would be okay. But I don\'t like putting Shu with anyone but his own lil Eiri-chan.

But that\'s just me.

I\'ve read...

MOST of Depravity...I think to about 16 or so...My favorite part thus far is the part where Yuki watches Shu jack off to the fantacy that they\'re fucking in the car together. Actually, I\'m planning on writing a story wbere they really DO fuck in the car because of that! But don\'t worry, I\'m no longer a part of any fanfiction sites (got kicked off), so you don\'t have to worry about me getting credit for your story ideas; it\'ll be for my own pleasure. Plus, if I were to ever join a new site, I\'d ask for permission from you to post it and put a disclaimer saying that I got my idea from someone else\'s fic.

Anywho, gotta go!

Toodles!!
person Your Mom\'s Face
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I agree with the review from Amethyest-eyed koenko (or whatever it was...). YOU NEED TO DO A KxRYU SCENE!!!

I die and go to heaven!!!

Seriously!

The thought of it is making me all giddy!!!!!

DO IT!!!!!!!

Ehem, anywho, with that, I take my leave.

Toodles!!

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