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for Fortuna

by Kali

person Sayuri
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I totally forgot to check up on updates for this fic because I don't get alerts from AFF. But when I came back to it tonight I forgot where I was so pretty much read the whole story again. I cried a lot because the angst you put in was really strong! Poor Yama, and I guess I can see how Tai was trying to protect himself in case Yama was unaccepting of what happened between them. By the way, hot scene ^_~ But these types of fics where both parties love each other and think the other doesn't draw me in unbearably but can also become frustrating since you really want the two to get together already. Anyway, hoping things do indeed start to look up for Matt and that they work things out. And I hope I won't forget about checking this again. =P
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil, EVIL spam bots!! I curse you~~
But anyways, on to the review!!
Again, poor Yamato. I'm glad to see that you've decided to stop pick on him long enough for him to regroup and gather his thoughts :p I want to know why he thinks that Takeru won't tell Taichi where he went though. Especially since Takeru knows that Yamato is sooooo in love with Taichi and how badly the darkness effects him when "the moment" (*purrs* oh what a wonderful moment it was) happened. I think that Takeru WILL tell Taichi. Maybe not straight off at the top but after watching him worry over where he is and wanting to talk to him about "the moment", but he will spill the beans. Oh foolish Yama. Oh well, I suppose thats really wishful thinking on his part. Haha.
Well, actually, now that I think about it, Taichi could figure out on his own that Yama went to the Digiworld and could ask the other Digimon where he is, since Yamato only made Takeru promise not to tell (right??).
Well I hope that good times get better with him and that you stop torturing him (unless its the good smexing kind)
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story!!! i read the whole thing in one day XD gosh those two just make me so mad! and i love every second of their angsty teenage lives!! please update as soon as possible-- i NEED to know what happens when a certain brunette returns home to find that his blonde is no where to be found ;D XOXOXOX
person pumbaaaa
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kind of a fill in chapter sort of...I don't know how else to describe it. Can't wait for some Tai and Matt interaction (of any kind!).
person pumbaaaa
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost, I just want to congratulate you and your more frequent updates recently, its making me a very happy person since this is the only WIP Digimon story I am following and recently needed some more dosage of it after reading too many other fandoms. Damn, I was hoping for some hot makeout session or something this chapter. Guess that would be to good to be true, huh? Anyways, can't wait for more.
person Khielira
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.O damn!! this was... like wow!! i can't wait for the next update!!
person Rainy
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! How could you do that to poor Yamato!! *cries* And once Taichi hears about this... he'll probably beat some common sense into him. *eyes you* You better not be planning to inflict more angst. More "i love taichi" angst is okay, but trips to the darkness is not!! There better be some good damn hot stuff coming up to make up for this
person Rainy
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, another absolutely EVIL cliffhanger from you :p I'll say it anyways: YOU ARE AN EVIL EVILLLLLLL PERSON. And not diet coke evil either. Haha. Somehow, I get the strange suspicion that we'll be seeing another trip denial the next chapter, instead of the HOT, PASSIONATE SEX that we all want to happen. Well, actually, at this point, I would be a happy duck to see them have a good hardcore make-out session. They both need a couple of those right now. Then after all the making out and the angst/drama you have lined up for them (cause you're evil) is dealt with, bring on the sex. *blinks* What?? I'm trying to be realistic, and its so much more fun to draw out the sex and hot make-out sessions are just as fun. And there's the need to have some sort of plot ^^ I hope to see another chapter update quicker then this one ;p
person pumbaaaa
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I also just wanted to say, is it just me or is Taichi some sort of sex god? Every story I read with him, he just seems so, sexy? I'm not sure how to put it into words. I mean, I've read Taito, Taisuke, and Taishiro, and hes just the sex in all of them, no matter what...
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD OMG!!! I can just picture the looks on their faces!!! XD hmmm, gotta admit to yourself yama, good way to wake up. lol, absolutely loved it and I can't wait to see how they take this!

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