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Oh! I loved this chapter- just the simplicity of cleaning a room and picking out the colors that best match their personalities- My favorite bit was Takeru hinting and bugging Yamato about his relationship with Taichi. A few spelling errors but nothing worth getting nit-picky about; overall- I can’t wait for the next one!

This is an excellently written fanfiction

omg ! a must update! please please onegai..........

LOVE! I love the closeness of Yamata and Taichi. Keep up the good work. I can't wait untill the next chapter.

I love the fact that I can now review the fanfics that I read. And now knowing how awesome if feels to get a review on sometihng that you've written, i'm definately going to be doing this a lot more. Let me start off by saying wow, you are a person after my own heart. I love Taito more than anything, even as an 11 year old girl sitting in front of the tv clutching the remote thinking how awesome it would be if Matt and Tai decided to shack up...yeah, who says i was a normal kid. It always gives me a tingly feeling to see someone do an amazing job at writing something that captures the emotions i had when watching the anime, which I'm rewatching at the moment as a matter of fact.

I absolutely love this fanfic. The fact that you have thrown angst in their without making either character an emotional wreck that needs to buy new razors every day makes me enthusiastic about the outcome as this as well. in fact, you've managed to keep the character integrity so strong that I find it a small, if it even exists, stretch to see them in this scenario. I adore the cute little things like Tai buying Yamato that slush, because it was also extremely sexy. And come on, who wouldn't want to see those two sandwiched against each other half dressed on a couch! Your moments are true and emotionally connect with me, the plot you have going makes me want to find out how things are going to work out with Tai's parents and how exactly there entire relationship secrets are going to come out. I could continue to sit here and gush at you for hours, but, i have my own writing to get back to. So please update soon, so i can lavish you with more reviews!

Syra

I am madly in love with this fiction. The pajama thing is a really cute touch; Taichi pays more attention to people than I do! xD

My only suggestion would be to get a beta, since there are a few mistakes.

Please don't abandon this story; it would be so sad! I am dying to read the next installment~!

WOOT! ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I nearly had a heart attack I was so excited to read it. REALLY WELL DONE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOO MUCH! please update soon... the tension is killing me!!!! Is Tai gonna end up cornering Matt into a confession? *squeel* Well, I CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE SO PLEASE BE KIND AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! lots of love!!! *giant hug*

omg i just want something to happen! it's driving me nuts! lol

Boy, they're dense aren't they. XD I'm loving this story so far. Normally I don't read the 1st person PoV, but this is really well written. I love all the fluff too. Yaay for fluff! <3 I hope you update this soon. I'm really looking forward to it. <3 I hope they figure it out soon, fluff is all good, but we need some action too. ^_~ Update soon!

Ki

Boy, they're dense aren't they. XD I'm loving this story so far. Normally I don't read the 1st person PoV, but this is really well written. I love all the fluff too. Yaay for fluff! Though fluff is all good, I hope we see some action soon. ^_~

I do love how you have their relationship now. It's really good to see that they've grown closer and aren't afraid to act 'affectionate' around eachother. Wai, I love Taito's! And you write them really well. <3

Update soon!

Ki~

(This is a full response, the site cut off the rest of my earlier one. ¬.¬)