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I usually don't review a story, but your writing abilities really got to me. 'Unlocking My Love' is so far the best fiction I've read.. (and I've read a lot!).

Thank you for sharing this and I hope you'll find the time to update.

Take care.

Glad to see another chapt up ... nice to see that you've still managed to keep Yukiin cannon. It's great to read the little twist and turns their relationship is taking. Hope your muse and creative juices keep flowing so we can get to read more chapts.

I have followed this story from the beginning of 'Key to my Heart' and now up to Chapter 18 of 'Unlocking My Love'. I have seen your writing, which was amazing to start, flourish and become so polished. It's shiny. You're shiny. The tenderness, poignancy and insight you write into these two star-crossed lovers is beautiful. You have been patient with them, with yourself, with the wonderful story you have unfolded for us--I can't tell you how impressed I am with how you are handling this. I would have rushed them into something too prematurely and the result would never have been what yours promises to be. They are both new people now, and the old relationship dynamics just won't work. I am so proud of the way you have matured Shuichi, and though Yuki may have deserved to have his lover back because of all the effort he put into finding him, Eiri is learning some hard lessons about what it means to love Shuichi as the fine person he is, and what all that loving and supporting and having a healthy relationship with another man entails. All said, Shuichi doesn't owe Eiri anything for bringing him back, and that would never be enough of a reason for a relationship. This is a great love story you are writing, and what they have together when you are through will be something they are investing their future and their whole lives in. Great work! Bravo!

I just read all 18 chapters in 1 sitting (well, I did take a dinner break).. I can understand the dilemma they both have, but it's 18 chapters. That good night kiss was great, but please, don't wait 18 more chapters for them to get back together... and you know they will get back together!!!!!! Oh.. and a side note: Happy Holidays!

KAMI...its about time...not just Shuichi kissing Yuki, whom I tend to feel sorry for in this particular story, with an update...How many times have I harrassed you?....Laughs...Ive never known anyone who takes their own sweet time in updating, oh wait there is someone but at least she updates once a month (choco)...Im teasing, really, okay maybe not too much...but damn girlfiend!!...you make us wait sooooooooooo long for a nibble of your excellent writing and story telling...we just want to pull our hair out and scream and then to top it off you ignore us when we send you reminders, which is probably a good thing, but still...laughs...you know I love you and hope that your non-religion holiday (laughs out loud) is a good one...hope to see another update in 2008 (winks)...catti

JadeHeart-sama...thank you so much for the awesome chapter...its good to see Shuichi finally relaxing a little with that kiss on the cheek...still feeling slightly sorry for Yuki...wonder whats in his journal, though...Im probably the one that keeps harassing you about updating...Im a spaz when it comes to that...gomen....update when you can...but more than likely Ill still harass you when it becomes more than a month...laughs...catti

You have wonderful talent -- not only writing, but your plot lines, narrative and dialog are superb! I have truly enjoyed not only this story so far (and eagerly await the next update) but also it's prequel, 'Key to my Heart'!

u are so evil! please keep up the awesome work! Update your other stories too! I'm anxious about them all! Update asap so-right?

-Kah Ristol-

finally!!!!!!! Thought they were never going to touch. Now at long last the law of gravity comes into reaction. thanks!

Kami..you are such a tease...please let them you know get together next chapter...this is soooo inferiorating....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA....laughs...catti