rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to say thank you for this amazing story! I just started to read it today and I can hardly bring myself to take a break. The details about the characters in this story are so complete. I just love the emotion between everyone. The plot is not just along for the ride and and the sex is hot,hot,hot and not just slam, bam, thank you mister but shows caring and tenderness. Just wanted to share a little feedback in thanks.

Okay...finally just sat down over the last few days and read this story..man really this is a long ass story and is quite good..I love the whole Ryo/Dee love story...and I can understand Ryo's reluctance to come "out of the closet" and discovering a new sexual life style...I like the whole story line with Abernathy and Drake and JJ (I know you have a separate story about those two). Like before, this is quite a story and am enjoying it but it is really long!!! I was wondering how many more chapters this story was going to be and also are you thinking about a pre sequel...I searched and all I could find was stories after the fact..You are an amazing author and I was wondering if you were thinking about writing a one shot or multi-chapter about Ryo finally submitting to Dee's charms...catti

Ahhhhh!!!! I love this story! I went to your live journal and read ch. 39 i'm hooked!!! I can noy wait till Ch. 40!!! ^__^ Please keep writing because I plan to keep reading.

I love this story so much!!!! I just stopped so I could tell you how much I love it! Thank you for taking the time to write it! ^_^

Peacewish here, you know me through Swordy. You're friended on LJ and I've been watching you announce your updates to this story for a while, but I just got so burned by the whole Fake fandom drama that I was timid about getting back into it, and figured I'd wait until sometime that I was more emotionally ready. Well, I am, and I read it, all 33 chapters in the space of two days, and I enjoyed every minute of it. You have a subtle, complex crime plot going here, which is a lot more than most Fakefic writers could ever manage, and I salute you for that. I also respect your willingness to research some of the boring facts to back up your story, which can't have been easy considering this isn't even set in your own native country. To be perfectly honest, I think you've put more work into factchecking than Sanami Matoh herself. Moreover, your narrative style is easy and readable, sufficiently scrubbed of spelling/grammar errors, also a rarity in the Fake fandom. Leave us not forget that the story actually centers on D/R, when most of the fandom seems to think Drake/JJ is the only couple worth discussing. I'm engrossed in the story and eagerly await installments.

"Now you've done it," he muttered to himself. His penis gave an answering twitch. "Behave yourself," he said sternly to it. GODS THAT WAS SOOOO FUCK'N FUNNY SHIT RYO TALK'N TO HIS COCK, PRICELESS!!!!

WOW..this is like a never ending story...

I am soooooooooo happy that this was updated!!!!!!!!!! I was even more happy to see that, Dee kicked that BASTARDS ASS, they way he treated Carol was uncalled for. Now, I just hope Dee is ok, along with Carol and Bikky.

Nice Story and I have to know what kind of trouble Dee will be walking into!

You're awesome!! ^_^
Keep it coming please!