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My God...how much longer can this go on.....

This is a really good fic, but I can't get to chapters 7,16 and 18 for some reason. They have nothing but the disclaimer! I didn't mind with 7, but the other two had hot smut and important story elements in that order! DX It made me sad, not being able to read more of your wonderful fanfic. TT_TT

Aside from that, keep up the great work! =D

Love your story. ^_^ I hope Abernathy(sp?) gets his ass fried. *grins* Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next post.

Ah! I started reading this story yesterday. I've been wanting to leave you a nice review. I have to say that I love reading this story. Your characterization is just bloody perfect. I can almost imagine the manga being drawn around your story! It's funny and light-hearted at some points, which is part of what I love so much about the series. Your sex scenes are fabulous, well-described and full of passion and all that jazz just like they should be. I also like this plot you have going on and the underlying themes of your story. It's very rich. It's almost like reading a FAKE novel, which makes me overjoyed. I think the usual plot lines of the manga are usually more dangerous and violent, but I'm interested in the missing boy thing you have going. I still haven't finished this story and I hope to review again once or more before I'm done. Thank you for this story! It's brilliant. ;D

I have to say this is a great great story. Fantastic plotline and I love that you have the Dee/Ryo thing in character. You write very well and in a pleasing way. The hot chapters were done well too. Sometimes people overdo it with these two but you managed to make me believe. Wonderful work. Keep it up. :)

great updates with chapters 8 and 9 , Britt ! I'm glad your self imposed exile is over and you're back in action again ! and don't fret , no one on the planet has started a post holiday diet yet . I have way too much chocolate at my house too ( freezer chilled york peppermint patties are the best ! )

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Love the fic!

As in from Brit...ish Columbia? If so very cool! SO am I!!

hey great update , I love the 6th installment on your livejournal . Dee stealing Ted's chocolate milk , hah hah , what a true male !! and yeah I bought 4 kit kats for everyone at my house today...thanks for the read on my story too . I finally finished it . I hate typing ...( shudder )

this story if REALLY awesome!! i love your writing style; it flows very well & you have a good handle on the characters. ^_^

i'm gonna go check your livejournal for chapter 5, i hope u post more soon!

I've been following your story on your live journal and really like it. Apparently you have to have a live journal of your own to comment there though. I love the twist you left at the end of chapter 5! I can only imagine the "favor" Dee has in mind from JJ! I'm also seriously envious of you going to yaoicon, someday maybe that will be in the cards for me,too. No one knows at my house my "obsession" with yaoi, however. I have also written some fake fic (5 so far) and am coming really close to getting up the nerve to post. The anonymity factor worries me,though. Is it really possible to keep things secret? Sorry for prattling on so long. Keep up the great writing, you have a faithful follower in me!