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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. Thanks for writing.
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you. and i love the chapter and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen next. so good luck on the next chapter and i will be here wait for it. up date soon.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kiba21 your story is real good and thank you for anwser me . and ican not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what happpen next. raven adn kris. do raoul forget raven or did raven forget raoul. good luck on the next chapter and be wait for more. up date soon.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow tht chapter was good and guy is there to talk to raven and raven think about his father riki who was raven mother. but i can not wait for the next chapter of the story up date soon. good luck.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is great and love it. i can not wait for more . i was happe to see that you up date and start to read and i love it. now what is going to happen to raven. up date soon.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that as good and i love it and i can not beleve that alex . so what is going tohappe, to raven next i can not wait for the next chapte good luck your fan. up date soon.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that chapte was good . up date soon. love ya.
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a good chapter and did some one take raven when they were don showing. and tell him to leave that kyln is a bitch. but still think that the story is real good. up date soon.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that chapter was good and i like it can not wait for more up dates on the story it is get real good now.. good luck
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the chapter and i hope that thing go okay for raven and i did not understand what rauol is doing . i have to wiat for the next chapter and see. good job see you up date soon