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for Rhyming Games

by rowen

person oxytreza
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
agraaaaah.
*drool*
fuck, that was...
okay, first, I couldn't stop laughing! hakkai being tortured with his own question was way too funny!
at one moment, I was scared that it could be a gojyo/sanzo and er, well, I HATE this paring. anyway, after, I was relievered. hu ha.
and then I finish to read the ten chapters and...GRAAAh, where is the following? I have to wait? noooo! *cry* well, I have to be patient. héhé.
well done. ^^
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the point at which I grin evilly and bow down. Yet another superb chapter, and well worth the wait. You know, it isn't the smut...I think I like your sense of humor. Because i think the funniest thing I've read in a while is "Shh. It's a secret". I almost fell out of my chair. And a drag queen hitting on Gojyo...kind of like a screen door on a submarine, isn't it? Quite hilarious. So yeah, I'm anxious to see what comes (no pun intended, but now that I look at it again, it seems like one) of Hakkai hearing that...Keep it up.

a/j
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You ended it there!! That is so evil... but I love it :-). It's good to see you back and continuing this fic, I've missed reading it a lot! Hope to see it updated soon!
person Nanaka
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update... I don't mind having to wait as long as yo do updae eventually... otherwise i turn into crazy stalker girl, hehe... well i loved this chapter, keep up th good work, i'll be waiting patiently for you're next update
person Dragon7
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!! ^_^ gojyo screamed hakkais name!!! eeek! (dies of blood loss through nose)
person Robyn
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* This latest chapter was so friggin' full of UST, angst and then THAT! :D


Thank you, thank you and THANK YOU!
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good! its alot better than some of the other saiyuki stories i've read. and i agree with you about Hakkai and his smile. it gets pretty tiring always having to picture him with that smile pastered to his face, like he's got premature rigor mortis or something. i can't wait for your next chapter! keep going!
person Robyn
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just finished with chapter 9. FINISH!!!!! The UST is killin' me!


Oh, yeah, and this is an excellent story. The flow of events and thoughts is easy to follow.
person Robyn
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to wait until I finished reading what you have written (excellent so far by the way!!!!) But this:

Dear god, it was a war zone. And Hakkai had never felt so perfectly content in all his twenty years of life. Perhaps he’d won this war…


OMG...I have found parts of this story amusing, yes, and I know this is not necessarily supposed to be a comedy, but THAT was hairlarious!

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