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Yay, another lovely chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!

Good god! this has to be one of the best saiyuki fics I've ever read. Okay it's the best. First off, you got both Gojyo's and Hakkai's personalties almost perfectly. Secondly, your vocabulary is simply fantastic. I'm a bit envious. Thirdly, your narration style is simply wonderful. You're a very good story teller my child. This is your first fictional work? God, I wish I was that lucky when I first started off. You're doing a wonderful job and I hope you update soon. That last part with all Hakkai was thinking was .... YES!.... made me laugh so hard it isn't funny. I definately think Hakkai would have thoughts like these. Never underestimate the quiet ones! Gojyo...gosh your Gojyo is so fucking wonderful! So much so, he's making me say the f-word. Now you know, I pervert like me always wondered just how big Gojyo-sama was but man, you're gonna have me daydreaming all day long. keep up the work!

Your wit continues to catch me off guard and amaze me in a "slap in the face with a wet fish" kind of way. Keep going my sharky goddess. Wouldn't your mother be proud ;)

Love the progression so far! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next!

my youkai brain is thinkig about the 6th chapter and the need for the 7th and saying........NOW!

Oh my, you're back!! It feels like I've been waiting forever to read this. Its just as fantastic as I hope it would be but I am now dying to read the next chapter, please tell me it won't be such a long wait. Pretty please!! Demon Hakkai is just too darned sexy and it is going to be amazing!

Hugs! Velvetina xx

I'm still reading so I'll be back, but I want to make sure I tell you this. I postively ADORE how you handled the Hakkai reading and thinking in the first chapter. That was priceless!

This is really good. I'd suggest not interjecting author's notes in the story, it messed with your beautiful flow and pulls the reader out of the story. You're writing it well enough that we don't need it. :) This story is so very graceful and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

Hey gurl I stumbled across this and found I couldn't stop readin your interpretation of Gojyo and Hakkai is so wonderful I feel like I'm actually reading the manga... please let me know when you write more I'm looking forward to reading it o.^ a wonderful story so far... you have a knack for it ^^=

This is a very different fic and a very interesting one. I am enjoying it to the max. Just found the chapter 1-5 and read then so now you got to give the that 6th one, I am hooked on it. It is so invigerating.