rate_review Reviews

Ooo! Very interesting so far! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ (585 fangirl squeal!)

The story is light hearted, but there are some deeper running themes here that add a great deal of depth to your story. I think you have the characters spot-on as well. I especially liked Hakkai's musings in Chapter 4. Looking forward to more chapters.

OMG I was entirely happy to see an update so soon! I can't wait until chapter 6, this is getting better and better! I LOOOOOOOVE this pairing, it makes my heart melt. This is a good fic!!!!!!!

I liked chapter 5 quite a bit with one exception: I feel the author should never incert themselves into the story. Remarking on how much you just had to poke fun at male thinking disturbed the flow of the story, which was truly sad.


I do encourage you to keep writing though, as you do seem to have great talent for it. I like your turns of phrase and imagery. Please, keep up the good work.

**Waves** Heya again! Boy was I happy to see this chapter out, I've been looking foward to it. And I'm glad that my reviews give you joy, that itself makes me smile!

This chapter was fantastic, I ~adored~ the start with Hakkai and how he changed. I think that vine pattern on Hakkai is ~so~ sexy to so when you were describing it my skin goosepimpled all over. I've got a very pretty picture of youkai Hakkai as my background, hee ^__^ And I'm also happy for Hakkai that the question that started all of this for him has been answered, **Cough** and that he seemed to have fun exploring that aspect of himself lol.

Also, finally, Gojyo seems to have snapped out of most of his denial. Obviously he's got a few issues about Sanzo, btu as long as he realises that Hakkai's sexy I'll let him get away with a little bit of denial. **Squee** I just love Gojyo, he's so cute and sexy and ...yum! lol. And yay it looks like he's going to be the one who's all befuddled now. Tjough Hakkai is acting very oddly. Hmmm.

Until next time!
Velvetina

Another excellent chapt ... I loved your description of what happens when Hakkai removes his 1 ear cuff for the 1st time and his stoned aftermath demeanour. A fic with humor and respect for its 2 leads. Yes!Hopefully, you're pumped up and inspired to keep writing the next few chapts. It's getting quite exciting and can't wait to read what happens next.

Wheee! This is coming along so well! I'm so happy to have good fanfiction to read <3! You do grasp Hakkai REALLY well, and you also seem to have a good grasp on Gojyo as well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

It's a pleasure to see that you've updated. Your description of Hakkai's transformation (and focus on control) is quite lovely. Poor Goyjo, in so much denial.

Sheesh, wanted to smack him over the head for being clinical about the transformation. I'm glad he finally gave in to explore the new sensations. This body should be a monument to life, he needs to relearn how to live. He does need to learn control of course, but life should be reveled in and treasured. Describing him as 'high as a kite' is exactly the state he should be in after that. Very good chapter.

Don't worry, I loved it. Puns make me groan, but I secretly love them.

Oh my god that was a bad pun. I had to stop reading and comment. Complimenting the bartender on his 'stock'. My brain is blown.

So, first Gojyo's attracted to girls that remind him of Sanzo, and now he's setting his sights on female versions of his roommate. All things considered, Hakkai is probably more attainable.

I'm not sure which I would find more entertaining, Hakkai's cock growing longer with each cuff removed, or the build up and let down of suspense as nothing happened until all three cuffs came off. Surprise me. And your writing's improving with each chapter, it's good to watch.