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for Rhyming Games

by rowen

person guanyin_kun
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoy this. Hakkai exploring his darker, but sexual side. "Are Human dicks smaller than Youkai dicks?" Yeah, I can see that going through his head. I can't wait for your next update.
person Primereef
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eep it coming! I love authors who update constantly! Man, your Hakkai is on point, for sure. Anxious for more.
person jayree05
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just stumbled upon your fic and I wanted to let you know that your writing style is really good and your story is awesome so far. Keep updating and I'll keep reviewing.
person Velvetina
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil place to leave us. Supremely evil!! That chapter was fantastic and I loved Gojyo in denial but now I'm dying to find out what happens. I'm sure its going to be good so I can't wait for the update ^_^

person Velvetina
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, poor Gojyo how I do love him. And Bless Hakkai, books are always the way to go in these cases. But he's darn right, whats he going to do with this new knowledge? Looking foward to the next chappie!
person shyria
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving it!
person bluesnake40
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapt had me laughing ... Hakkai's internal conversations are hlarious and yet so Hakkai! Pls continue as can't wait to see how things develop between the 2. This is one of my fave pairings and it's nice to see it being set pre-travelling.
person Velvetina
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! Please, I'm really enjoying this and its so much fun to see Hakkai all befuddled about whats going on. I'm dying to find out how he's going to handle everything. Bring on chapter three!! :-D
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL, keep it up!
person gretel_chan
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! I really like what you've written so far. Hakkai's internal monologues are very funny, and quite in character. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

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