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Funny concept, I'm just waiting for HAkkai to pull his limiters off. I love the chapter titles.

Ho ho ho, I love this story of yours. It's really a unique fanfiction premise for this series, you don't see many stories that take place when Hakkai and Gojyo are living together. And I love Hakkai's inner thoughts and the way he tries to rationalize his facination with Gojyo's penis. Poor him. I like how you added that little bit at the end of the third chapter about Gojyo's one night stand. He seemed a bit freaked out. Would love to read more! =)

This is extremely entertaining and reads like a tale. Your take on Hakkai's thoughts and emotions are quite realistic as to how I imagine his reactions would be to his curiosity and worries about his own 'equipment'. I can't wait to read how the tale is told and whether Hakkai gives in to his curiosity about his youkai anatomy. Thanks for posting this story and updating so quickly!

I love this and cannot wait to see what the next chapter brings. You have a really good handle on Hakkai I think, and I could see in perfectly in my mind whilst reading this!

Very good!!

Very nifty! You get into the character really well! Please write some more! I want smut D:<

Well, it's an entertaining concept, and now we know what you meant by Hakkai 'getting in touch with his youkai side.'

OMG - This is really funny! Great story so far! Please continue! Can't wait until the next update!