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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No reviews for this chapter, yet? How sad! Well, I'm so taken with this story that I just HAD to review and tell you how amazing I think it is. I absolutely love the moral conflict of the whole thing, and how they're steadily losing the battle between what they want and what is "right." Plus, I'm actually guilty of falling for a (student) teacher when I was in high school, so this is almost what I wished would have happened. Morality won out in my case, but I'm glad to see it isn't working out for theirs. It makes things so interesting!
Please write some more, no matter how long you need, because I would love to see where things go now that they've reached this turning point. I'll be checking in, and thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic!
Please write some more, no matter how long you need, because I would love to see where things go now that they've reached this turning point. I'll be checking in, and thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic!
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, this puts a whole new level for "hot for teacher" HUH? HEHE
KEWL!
KEWL!
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Action, drama, mild adventure. Too bad its not finished. :(
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story!! very well conveyed! please update :)
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November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least things are moving forward, kind of... All things considered, all she really needs to do is wait until she graduates and then, BAM!, he's all hers, not strings attached, well, mostly. Until chapter 6, then. Laters.
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going :). Some of the dialouge is a little choppy but still good! Try separating it from storyline and thoughts more(let it have it's own paragraph) it'll be easier to read. :) 5+'s!
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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, has potential. I look forward to chapter 5. Until then. Laters.
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I hope that you can update soon.
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for next chapter. i hope you finish the story.
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot!!!!!! Please keep writing!!!!