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I have read this on ff.net and by the looks of it your not finished on this site either, its too bad.

Well, i must say i like your story. It's a nice start to what could turn out to be a most humorous, entertaining and passionate story. You have plenty of potential to work with and i like the idea of Darien being Serena's teacher, it creates a nice complication for them, especially if you plan on this being a normal fic where Serena and the girls are living normal lives instead of transforming and fighting evil. Or do you plan on keeping with the story line? Plus her chances of being with Andrew being squashed is pleasing, cuz i always thought Andrew would be too mature for her, and Darien had a playful and picking nature in the beginning of the anime that suits Serena's personality better. Although you could use Andrew for certain purposes and have him more involved, since he always seemed so oblivious in the anime, and maybe he could actually be interested in Serena or one of the girls this time. Serena was always so worried about some girl looking at Darien in the anime that he never had to worry about her, which made me think he got her too easy,lol;) Girls should give guys some form of challenge shouldn't they. Of course I'm just sharing my thoughts with you, i have a tendency to write or say whatever i'm thinking. i have tons of stories lying around that I've started and haven't finished, which reminds me i should go work on one. Hope you don't think i'm too presumptuous. I really like the beginning and i can't wait for you to update to see what you come up with;P

OMG lol thats great

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Look intersting. Hope you continue. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.