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*prods Story* erm is there more after chapter 3?

That's it??!!!! I want more!!! Please keep writing!!!! I looooooove IasonxRiki!!! ^___^ Thanks for your story!!

Whooo! that'll teach me to read Author's notes! I got to chapter three and panicked. I read this story annually, i've always liked it and love that it wasn't tainted by the taming Riki fanfic (though Taming Riki was a very good fic i feel too many people take it for canon). Your plot was very good and i really enjoyed the way you explained riki's mutation.

I cant wait until its finished again ^-^

and another question, does this mean you are going to complete the sequel? I would love to see how that goes. I'll keep an eye out now.

Thanks for a great story

Just tell me one thing since i read this whole story already... will it end the same?

Was it complete or not done cause it says completed and it does not looke complete,it looks more!I want more!!

I must admit, I was pleasantly surprised to see that you have decided to re-edit/re-engineer this story, which i absolutely adore by the way!! I discovered this site nearly a year ago, being that I am somewhat new to yaoi. Regardless that I am a BL novice, I consider myself an AnK enthusiast, ever since i saw the ova, I was hooked. I followed up my introduction to the AnK ova with fanfictions and novel(currently reading vol.3 "Nightmare")and it's been a passionate hobby of mine ever since.
Anyway, back to your fic. Initially, you should know that I am strictly a reader, not a writer. I don't feel very comfortable with giving you criticism on this since I am not a very literary person and I don't know proper literary tools or devices to help you improve the work in technical skill. I won't bitch about typos/grammar and the like, I find it petty to do so, unless it's ridiculously bad and causes the work to be incomprehensible and all context is lost. I loved the original version and hope you don't veer too far away from that, but, improve it where you see fit. However, I am comfortable in lending my support and giving you encouragement if it will keep you writing more of these wonderfully sinful stories which I obsessively fill my time with. I anxiously await your next chapter.

...the only recommendation I have: don't forget to add more lemon, if you know I mean. I love excruciatingly long, elaborately detailed, deliciously slick and hot bed/sensual scenes...don't we all.

-missmotoko

Hello! I'm just starting your fic...i came back in time to search for interestings abstracts of Ai no kusabi fics, and i found your!!! Quite interesting actually. Riki pregnant!!! This is the first fic i read with that topic on it...not that it botters me, actually i'm quite fascinate with the concept.
Poor Riki, he must be feeling very sick, with the hormones all going nuts and Iason...smiles him? Of course he scream and run away...i will do it too....jijijiji

Well...i see Iason still Iason no matter waht....-_-'''
Definitvely, a Blondie, who doesn't know ANYTHING about feelings....

Jajajaja, poor Guy....too much novels. That's were people do usually learns that: vomit+not drinks+notsmoke+other stuffs=pregancy.... XD

I'm gona kill Guy...noway, Iason is going to kill him...or maybe he'll save us the problem and just kill himself...