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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah, you killed them. I'm glad you finally got a chance to finish and post this story. Kudos to you. Wah, though. wah, wah.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes please write and story about rion , and guy. i will like that.because i think that you have write is real good. and see what happen to them.. and the story was real good. thank you very much for the story would you love me. i was sad were they die and they did not get and change to see their boys . thank you. my email is cococke5@yahoo.com. let me know if you do write a story about rion, guy. thank you.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil moi? Bwahahahah hahaaa...er...teehee teehee. Well at least I didn't kill off my main characters. (Fish eye back at ya!) Get writing. You have been commanded.
Kiix
Kiix
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no...why did they have to die...please update this because i would like to know what is going to happen to the kids.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They died? No happily ever after? They died?
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As I have now dyed my hair platnium blonde, you are commanded to write more immediately. tout suite!
X will be held hostage until you comply. j/k
X will be held hostage until you comply. j/k
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes that chapter was good and now i am waiting to see what happen when they go after jutper and blow her up . up date soon . your story is real good. good luck ..
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is fascinating, it's a bit long for a single sitting which there is nothing wrong with. Well writing, it keeps you wanting to read. All in all an excellent story.
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes that was great chapters and i cannot wait for more of the story and see if they get off the world or they bring jupter down . your story is going real good up date soon. your fan.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are just evilness. Cliff hanger-on_er here. Waiting patiently for rescue. More chappies please