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this broke my heart

really good yet extremely sad

this one was uncomfortable to read but it still was a good chapter

what the hell is wrong with the blondies

poor Rik having to do what he did please just let the whole thing be a bad nightmare for Riki and let him wake to a loveing master

I just found this under my favorite book "Ai No Kusabi" as a fan fic. I wasn't sure if I would be able to read a story where Iason, Raoul, Riki, & Yui had gone full circle. The 1st chapter was extremely hard to read, because I could never see two seme's together and really don't like the two Blondies together. Being the fan that I am though I made it through in one piece without pulling my hair out because of those two asses. I am now just finishing chapter 2/3 and I just had to find that song that was in the story and play if while re-reading the chapter. The song so tells the relationship that I come to know between the four men. Now unfortunately I am have trouble drying tear filled eyes. By the way I was already misting after the first read though of this chapter (giggles). I guess I should not have brought the song to listen to because I am now suffering from torrential downpours, but I'm happy and hesitant to go to the next chapter. I can see a point in your circle now though and I am anxious to get to chapter 3/4 (LOL). I will tell you if I've and gone to heaven in the end (smirking). Thanks for the change in lovey dovey I've been read on the steamy couple.

I have just finished reading Mongrel King. It was very, very hard on me because Riki had to suffer so much. This is the first fan fic that I have read that showed Jupiter as the Bitchy, Sneaky, Evil AI that she is in all of the books and anime's. True to the fact that she really did just sit back and watch the shit hit the fan, after she started the shit to begin with. I am impressed, it must have been hard to write some of this. I have quite an imagination, to which I haven't put online, but I may not have finished it because it would have hurt to read everything that the three had to endure. I really did like the way that Riki handled Raoul and Iason, it was extremely graceful almost like the way a suspense movie would have ended. Keep writing I look forward to more of your work.

an update at last....computer's break down can be a bitch....as for kira, well your story is based on her fanfiction honey.....anyway, can't wait for your next chapter....i'm one of your twisted little pets after all..

Wow, you sure like to rough them up. Seems like they're way beyond a happy ending now. ...well, depends on the point of view I guess, Raoul and Iason are clearly living their dream. I feel so bad for Riki (and Daryl and Katze too), but I just can't see this ending in any other way but misery. Sorry if this sounded a bit gloomy. I like to read all the AnK stories I'm able to find, and I'm happy if someone takes time to write them, but to me, this is just too cruel. Hah :D

I want Iason and Riki together! Make Iason and Raoul snap out of it and be good again please?